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    Post by Norou Shikage Tue Dec 15, 2015 4:55 pm

    Norou Shikage
    Orou
    28
    March 16th
    Human/Basilisk
    SS
    Chaotic Evil
    Male


    Species Ability/Perk

    Vessel of Ouroboros: Upon Slaying the Legendary creature Ouroboros and having it become a part of him, Norou is the half human vessel of the creature, Norou is capable of shedding the highest layer of his skin off and grow a new layer which allows him to heal his wounds and replace dead skin. This ability derives from the powerful reviving ability of the Ouroboros which is channeled through a host, namely Norou whom is also apart of Ouroboros. Healing factor mechanics work as follows according to the rank of the mage:

    Healing factor mechanics:

    Snake sense: Norou has the perceptual ability which is actually even greater than that of any snake, he is capable of seeing in infrared, allowing him to track heat signatures when he cannot actually see.
    Visual range:


    Special Unique Characteristics
    N/A

    Character Depth
    Personality: Norou can be described primarily as the worst man you could imagine, he is extremely dark and demented inside though he was actually always this way even though he had been such a sweet little boy, a boy that became the vessel for the Legendary creature known as Ouroboros, tainting his soul even further than it already was to begin with.

    Dealing with so much personal darkness can drive a person to the brink of insanity and it makes most lose all humanity and become a broken slave to they're own darkness, this is not the case for Norou however. Norou broke his own insanity and made it his bitch. Norou has many different layers and masks which he uses to hide his true personality most of the time which can be broken down in to specific personality traits:

    Abrasive: Norou can be extremely abrasive and is most of the time, it's all apart of his Dark King persona that he adopts. Often he is extremely harsh and not very quick to forgive if he is even forgiving at all. He is also extremely rough, he never "goes easy" on people and tends to interrogate harshly if he thinks someone is lying or treats them with the utmost disrespect when he feels insulted which is rather easy to make him feel. All around he is actually a rather hard person to deal with because of this since he seems to have a rather hardened shell around his psyche.

    Apathetic: One of the major personality traits that shines through brightly is apathy, Norou often shows little concern for the goals of those who do not share the same goal as him, he tends to push others aside as if they were second rate. He also often shows an intense lack of emotion besides that of ecstasy or bliss which he normally finds when mating or killing, those are the two things that he enjoys the most in the world, aside from getting what he wants of course.

    Disobedient: Norou wishes to be in control at all times and often has power-struggles with the people that are close to him because he does not listen very well. Most of the time when someone tells him he should or needs to do something he tends on doing the opposite of that very thing, unless he himself knows that doing what he wants to do would end up being his undoing. While he tries to disobey at every turn there are even some things that he wouldn't do to jeopardize his own goals and for the certain people he is close with, he knows they have the best of intentions for him.

    Lascivious: For those that know him, they would most certainly describe him as lascivious, he expresses lust in many extreme ways. When he wants something he will stop at nothing to get it, it is usually that of a female or a form of power which drives him to do whatever it is he might be doing. He is extremely sexual in manner especially around women, sometimes he can be around men but never to a point where it is actually anything, he merely likes to taunt and creep out his victims at all costs as he is extremely comfortable in his own skin.

    Controlling: Norou is extremely controlling at times, he dislikes when things do not go his way and often likes to resort to violence when this happens. So instead of leaving things to chance, Norou likes to be in control of every situation he encounters, doing whatever must be done to make sure he stays in control. Whether it's close personal people, subordinates or enemies, Norou will make his best attempt to make sure he is in the lead and he is winning, that is what he does, it's who he is.

    Intelligent: One thing that Norou values above all else is intelligence, it is extremely important to him because he normally likes to view things as a game and when participating in a game, luck is only a part of it, in order to best your opponents you must not only be lucky but smarter than your opponents, Norou makes it a point to stay steps ahead of everyone else, planning everything in succession instead of in the moment and because of this he is a visionary.

    Caring: Contrary to common belief, Norou is very capable of caring and despite being only half human he does have all the emotions that come along with being human. Norou has a belief that there is light and darkness in everyone and depending on which half you feed is what you become. Being a very dark person has indeed changed the way he views things but there are some things that can never leave someone so long as there is that little bit of humanity in them, no matter what it takes to trigger that. Norou can display a sense of caring in his own way, though most of the time it can be hard to pick out, those who know him well are able to tell.

    Charismatic: Norou is extremely charismatic despite his shortcomings and often comes of as extremely appealing to people, playing to they're desires is what he does best. Playing the devils advocate is something that comes natural to Norou, there are few things Norou enjoys more than giving people what they want, especially when it involves some sort of personal gain for himself also. Rarely will you find Norou doing something for someone else without him getting something out of it though when he does do something for someone with no personal gain for himself he would never admit to it and even try to play it off as if there were some gain for him as he dislikes revealing his weaknesses.

    Protective: Norou is an extremely private person and many people will find it hard to be apart of his actual "circle of trust" because it is extremely small and normally puts people through several series of tests before they actual become a trusted person to him. Using himself as an example he judges people with the thought in mind that they too are only in it for personal gain which makes him extremely guarded. When you are within the walls of Norou's "circle of trust" you become like family to him even if he does not openly show it. When it comes to those he trusts and enjoys he would destroy the world for them which makes threatening Norou's cared ones something only a dead man would dare to do.

    Intuitive: Norou is extremely intuitive as well as perceptive, he picks up on things extremely quickly which helps him to be rather decisive and gives him the upper hand in a lot of situations which only attributes to his powerful personality. Whether it be people or situations, Norou is able to read them like a book, of which he is an avid reader. Norou picks up on the subtle ques a person can make in facial expression or body language or even speech pattern which allows him to gain a lot of personal insight on a persons well-being, creating an open advantage for him to use for good or evil purposes.

    Likes:
    - Fighting: Conflict is something that Norou enjoys greatly, especially of the physical kind. Norou is extremely confrontational in most situations especially with someone he doesn't know and a good way for him to judge whether this person is even worth knowing or talking to is to test they're strength, giving them the option to die or live by they're own means. If they should so live, Norou usually ends of at least hearing what they have to say.

    - Control: Norou absolutely loves having the upper hand in any given situation whether he plans to flaunt that fact or not. Most everything is a game to him and he loves to win so staying steps ahead of everyone else is how he inflicts his command and control over things, he makes sure that he is number one always.

    - Sarcasm: Norou is extremely sarcastic at times, especially the times when people want him to not be the most. "I told you so" Is Norou's favorite line, the joy it brings him when he gets to have those moments would confuse a normal person, it's simply something that he lives for, there is no rhyme or reason behind it other than his own personal things he enjoys.

    Dislikes:
    - Romance: Norou has, throughout his life, had extremely bad experiences with romance and because of that he strongly dislikes seeing it despite wanting it for himself as well deep down. At the sight of it he often acts repulsed and attempts to stop it immediately, there are some situations where Norou would possibly not do this but it would be based off of situation by situation and the given circumstances.

    - Rain: It's hard to explain but to Norou there is nothing more annoying than rain, it's not that he hates to get wet but its just the fact that it's tiny random bits of water dropping on him. If he gets caught out in the rain without proper gear he can become very annoyed and irritable, often complaining until he is properly dressed or no longer in the rain, his dislike for 'rain' can be both literally and metaphorically however.

    - Mistakes: Norou absolutely loathes mistakes, while he sees himself as making few to none, which may or may not be true, Norou hates it when those he trusts or are his subordinates make mistakes, it drives him to the point of anger. Norou is a perfections and because of that, mistakes are the path of failure to him and failure is what all perfectionists fear.

    Fears:
    - Failure: As a perfectionist there are very few things that he honestly fears as he often feels as if everything he touches turns to gold. One of the biggest things a perfections does fear is failure, failure is the very worst thing to a perfections because it means that what they have been doing is wrong and that does not sit will with them, often leading to fits of uncontrollable rage.

    - Internal Chaos: Internal chaos is something that Norou fears, while he takes great joy in creating external chaos, internal chaos terrifies Norou because he knows what he is like when his switch is flipped and he sees red. When Norou becomes this way he loses sight of all that is important to him, essentially he gives a shit about absolutely nothing when he is like this and will even go against his own plans just to feel like he is being a rebel.

    - Commitment: One of Norou's greatest fears is commitment, he has never been committed to anyone but himself, give or take one or two people. Because of this he fears becoming too committed to someone or something, often doing irrational things when he feels like he is backed into a corner, often 'ruining' things though not to the point of complete destruction, barely maintaining his connection with the person or thing in question.

    Motivations/Goals:
    - Power: Norou hold power in extremely high value because of his beliefs and perfectionism. Norou believes that power is the key to everything, he believes that power can get you anything you want given the know-how which is why he rarely never gets what he wants, he is relentless in his efforts and sees himself as an absolute winner.

    - Kingship: Norou prefers a situation where he himself is in control because when it comes down to it, at the end of the day, Norou only trusts Norou. Norou wishes to climb the ladder of Darkness and rise to the very top, raining over the Dark Guilds and eventually all of the Guilds as they're one true King, commanding them as he will. Norou has an Empire state of mine where he wishes to unite the powers that be, but to unite them under himself, making those that deny him either submit or die.

    - Ouroboros: One of the forces within him that plays the Devils Advocate to Norou as he plays the very same to others. Norou has been fused with the Legendary Creature known as Ouroboro's the Snake God and it has altered him accordingly. He is no longer completely human because of this but something much better. Ouroboros is a driving force behind Norou's actions, sometimes not even Norou may be understanding why he is doing something but the voice inside of him tells him that it is right and so he does it, Norou actually has no idea whether what is inside of him has ill will towards him for slaying it or not, all he knows is that Ouroboros and himself are now one in the same, they're fates entwined with each other.



    Appearance
    Hair: Jet Black
    Eyes: Crimson
    Skin Tone: Light
    Height: 6'3"
    Weight: 164 lbs.
    Overall Appearances:
    Spoiler:


    Other

    Guild: Erebus Crown (Guild Master)
    Guild Tattoo: Center of his back





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    Post by Ryoshi Sat Jan 09, 2016 1:26 pm

    Hello, I am Ryoshi and I will be grading your app today. However, as a mod-in-training, I can only grant first approval. This means that another staff member must come along, check my work and give their second approval in order for this app to be usable.

    After looking this app over, I can say that this is a well-constructed character. Therefore, I give it my first approval.
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    Post by Genesis Sat Jan 09, 2016 7:41 pm

    Hi my name is Genesis and I will be grading your app today.

    First of all for your healing perk. You can only heal 16% for C rank, 23% for B rank, 25% for A rank, 27% for S, 30% for SS rank and finally 35% for X rank. And you can only heal 1/2 the said percentages over the course of two posts. (Example: you can only heal 5% per post for D)

    Your second perk seems like 3 perks in one. You have your infared vision, your telescopic vision and your sunglasses vision. Please take out two of the following that I mentioned.

    Bump when changes have been made~
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    Post by Hiroko Sun Jan 10, 2016 3:08 pm

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    Use the numbers in D aagainst D, C against C and so on. The healing needs to be in aa duration of at least 2 posts, so at D rank you heal for 2 posts 5% each post. The cooldown must always be higher than the duration, probably increasing with the rank just as you did above.
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    Post by Norou Shikage Sun Jan 10, 2016 6:34 pm

    Bumpity
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    Post by Genesis Sun Jan 10, 2016 6:36 pm

    OK, I'm going to assume your first perk cannot be used at all for the time being. Second approval given.
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    Post by Norou Shikage Sat Jan 23, 2016 7:21 pm

    Updated perk: Vessel of Ouroboros. Ready for grading.
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    Post by Norou Shikage Mon Feb 01, 2016 9:32 pm

    Bump
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    Post by Ryoshi Tue Feb 02, 2016 2:50 pm

    By the power vested in me by the great and almighty Bacon, I, Ryoshi, hereby give this app my first approval.
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    Post by Norou Shikage Thu Feb 04, 2016 5:02 am

    Healing factor updated to only heal instead of heal and regenerate.
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    Post by Selenia Thu Feb 04, 2016 8:52 am

    Norou Shikage wrote:
    Norou Shikage
    Orou
    28
    March 16th
    Human/Basilisk
    SS
    Chaotic Evil
    Male


    Species Ability/Perk

    Vessel of Ouroboros: Upon Slaying the Legendary creature Ouroboros and having it become a part of him, Norou is the half human vessel of the creature, Norou is capable of shedding the highest layer of his skin off and grow a new layer which allows him to heal his wounds and replace dead skin. This ability derives from the powerful reviving ability of the Ouroboros which is channeled through a host, namely Norou whom is also apart of Ouroboros. Healing factor mechanics work as follows according to the rank of the mage:

    Healing factor mechanics:
    How long is the duration for each? Once I know that, I'll be able to grade this.

    Snake sense: Norou has the perceptual ability which is actually even greater than that of any snake, he is capable of seeing in infrared, allowing him to track heat signatures when he cannot actually see.
    Needs a spell range of equivalent rank.


    Special Unique Characteristics
    N/A

    Character Depth
    Personality: Norou can be described primarily as the worst man you could imagine, he is extremely dark and demented inside though he was actually always this way even though he had been such a sweet little boy, a boy that became the vessel for the Legendary creature known as Ouroboros, tainting his soul even further than it already was to begin with.

    Dealing with so much personal darkness can drive a person to the brink of insanity and it makes most lose all humanity and become a broken slave to they're own darkness, this is not the case for Norou however. Norou broke his own insanity and made it his bitch. Norou has many different layers and masks which he uses to hide his true personality most of the time which can be broken down in to specific personality traits:

    Abrasive: Norou can be extremely abrasive and is most of the time, it's all apart of his Dark King persona that he adopts. Often he is extremely harsh and not very quick to forgive if he is even forgiving at all. He is also extremely rough, he never "goes easy" on people and tends to interrogate harshly if he thinks someone is lying or treats them with the utmost disrespect when he feels insulted which is rather easy to make him feel. All around he is actually a rather hard person to deal with because of this since he seems to have a rather hardened shell around his psyche.

    Apathetic: One of the major personality traits that shines through brightly is apathy, Norou often shows little concern for the goals of those who do not share the same goal as him, he tends to push others aside as if they were second rate. He also often shows an intense lack of emotion besides that of ecstasy or bliss which he normally finds when mating or killing, those are the two things that he enjoys the most in the world, aside from getting what he wants of course.

    Disobedient: Norou wishes to be in control at all times and often has power-struggles with the people that are close to him because he does not listen very well. Most of the time when someone tells him he should or needs to do something he tends on doing the opposite of that very thing, unless he himself knows that doing what he wants to do would end up being his undoing. While he tries to disobey at every turn there are even some things that he wouldn't do to jeopardize his own goals and for the certain people he is close with, he knows they have the best of intentions for him.

    Lascivious: For those that know him, they would most certainly describe him as lascivious, he expresses lust in many extreme ways. When he wants something he will stop at nothing to get it, it is usually that of a female or a form of power which drives him to do whatever it is he might be doing. He is extremely sexual in manner especially around women, sometimes he can be around men but never to a point where it is actually anything, he merely likes to taunt and creep out his victims at all costs as he is extremely comfortable in his own skin.

    Controlling: Norou is extremely controlling at times, he dislikes when things do not go his way and often likes to resort to violence when this happens. So instead of leaving things to chance, Norou likes to be in control of every situation he encounters, doing whatever must be done to make sure he stays in control. Whether it's close personal people, subordinates or enemies, Norou will make his best attempt to make sure he is in the lead and he is winning, that is what he does, it's who he is.

    Intelligent: One thing that Norou values above all else is intelligence, it is extremely important to him because he normally likes to view things as a game and when participating in a game, luck is only a part of it, in order to best your opponents you must not only be lucky but smarter than your opponents, Norou makes it a point to stay steps ahead of everyone else, planning everything in succession instead of in the moment and because of this he is a visionary.

    Caring: Contrary to common belief, Norou is very capable of caring and despite being only half human he does have all the emotions that come along with being human. Norou has a belief that there is light and darkness in everyone and depending on which half you feed is what you become. Being a very dark person has indeed changed the way he views things but there are some things that can never leave someone so long as there is that little bit of humanity in them, no matter what it takes to trigger that. Norou can display a sense of caring in his own way, though most of the time it can be hard to pick out, those who know him well are able to tell.

    Charismatic: Norou is extremely charismatic despite his shortcomings and often comes of as extremely appealing to people, playing to they're desires is what he does best. Playing the devils advocate is something that comes natural to Norou, there are few things Norou enjoys more than giving people what they want, especially when it involves some sort of personal gain for himself also. Rarely will you find Norou doing something for someone else without him getting something out of it though when he does do something for someone with no personal gain for himself he would never admit to it and even try to play it off as if there were some gain for him as he dislikes revealing his weaknesses.

    Protective: Norou is an extremely private person and many people will find it hard to be apart of his actual "circle of trust" because it is extremely small and normally puts people through several series of tests before they actual become a trusted person to him. Using himself as an example he judges people with the thought in mind that they too are only in it for personal gain which makes him extremely guarded. When you are within the walls of Norou's "circle of trust" you become like family to him even if he does not openly show it. When it comes to those he trusts and enjoys he would destroy the world for them which makes threatening Norou's cared ones something only a dead man would dare to do.

    Intuitive: Norou is extremely intuitive as well as perceptive, he picks up on things extremely quickly which helps him to be rather decisive and gives him the upper hand in a lot of situations which only attributes to his powerful personality. Whether it be people or situations, Norou is able to read them like a book, of which he is an avid reader. Norou picks up on the subtle ques a person can make in facial expression or body language or even speech pattern which allows him to gain a lot of personal insight on a persons well-being, creating an open advantage for him to use for good or evil purposes.

    Likes:
    - Fighting: Conflict is something that Norou enjoys greatly, especially of the physical kind. Norou is extremely confrontational in most situations especially with someone he doesn't know and a good way for him to judge whether this person is even worth knowing or talking to is to test they're strength, giving them the option to die or live by they're own means. If they should so live, Norou usually ends of at least hearing what they have to say.

    - Control: Norou absolutely loves having the upper hand in any given situation whether he plans to flaunt that fact or not. Most everything is a game to him and he loves to win so staying steps ahead of everyone else is how he inflicts his command and control over things, he makes sure that he is number one always.

    - Sarcasm: Norou is extremely sarcastic at times, especially the times when people want him to not be the most. "I told you so" Is Norou's favorite line, the joy it brings him when he gets to have those moments would confuse a normal person, it's simply something that he lives for, there is no rhyme or reason behind it other than his own personal things he enjoys.

    Dislikes:
    - Romance: Norou has, throughout his life, had extremely bad experiences with romance and because of that he strongly dislikes seeing it despite wanting it for himself as well deep down. At the sight of it he often acts repulsed and attempts to stop it immediately, there are some situations where Norou would possibly not do this but it would be based off of situation by situation and the given circumstances.

    - Rain: It's hard to explain but to Norou there is nothing more annoying than rain, it's not that he hates to get wet but its just the fact that it's tiny random bits of water dropping on him. If he gets caught out in the rain without proper gear he can become very annoyed and irritable, often complaining until he is properly dressed or no longer in the rain, his dislike for 'rain' can be both literally and metaphorically however.

    - Mistakes: Norou absolutely loathes mistakes, while he sees himself as making few to none, which may or may not be true, Norou hates it when those he trusts or are his subordinates make mistakes, it drives him to the point of anger. Norou is a perfections and because of that, mistakes are the path of failure to him and failure is what all perfectionists fear.

    Fears:
    - Failure: As a perfectionist there are very few things that he honestly fears as he often feels as if everything he touches turns to gold. One of the biggest things a perfections does fear is failure, failure is the very worst thing to a perfections because it means that what they have been doing is wrong and that does not sit will with them, often leading to fits of uncontrollable rage.

    - Internal Chaos: Internal chaos is something that Norou fears, while he takes great joy in creating external chaos, internal chaos terrifies Norou because he knows what he is like when his switch is flipped and he sees red. When Norou becomes this way he loses sight of all that is important to him, essentially he gives a shit about absolutely nothing when he is like this and will even go against his own plans just to feel like he is being a rebel.

    - Commitment: One of Norou's greatest fears is commitment, he has never been committed to anyone but himself, give or take one or two people. Because of this he fears becoming too committed to someone or something, often doing irrational things when he feels like he is backed into a corner, often 'ruining' things though not to the point of complete destruction, barely maintaining his connection with the person or thing in question.

    Motivations/Goals:
    - Power: Norou hold power in extremely high value because of his beliefs and perfectionism. Norou believes that power is the key to everything, he believes that power can get you anything you want given the know-how which is why he rarely never gets what he wants, he is relentless in his efforts and sees himself as an absolute winner.

    - Kingship: Norou prefers a situation where he himself is in control because when it comes down to it, at the end of the day, Norou only trusts Norou. Norou wishes to climb the ladder of Darkness and rise to the very top, raining over the Dark Guilds and eventually all of the Guilds as they're one true King, commanding them as he will. Norou has an Empire state of mine where he wishes to unite the powers that be, but to unite them under himself, making those that deny him either submit or die.

    - Ouroboros: One of the forces within him that plays the Devils Advocate to Norou as he plays the very same to others. Norou has been fused with the Legendary Creature known as Ouroboro's the Snake God and it has altered him accordingly. He is no longer completely human because of this but something much better. Ouroboros is a driving force behind Norou's actions, sometimes not even Norou may be understanding why he is doing something but the voice inside of him tells him that it is right and so he does it, Norou actually has no idea whether what is inside of him has ill will towards him for slaying it or not, all he knows is that Ouroboros and himself are now one in the same, they're fates entwined with each other.



    Appearance
    Hair: Jet Black
    Eyes: Crimson
    Skin Tone: Light
    Height: 6'3"
    Weight: 164 lbs.
    Overall Appearances:
    Spoiler:


    Other

    Guild: Erebus Crown (Guild Master)
    Guild Tattoo: Center of his back
    Color?





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    Post by Norou Shikage Fri Feb 05, 2016 8:18 am

    Duration of healing factor added.

    As I see no spell ranges equating to rank in the magic guide, I have no idea so im just going to put that the range is dependent upon the maximum range of the characters rank.

    Edits have been made.
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    Post by Selenia Fri Feb 05, 2016 9:16 pm

    Here are the AOE Ranges for your second perk, please put them in, or specify that your perk is AOE (since I believe you intend it to be, but if not, specify that.)

    D-Rank: 10 meter radius maximum
    C-Rank: 25 meter radius maximum
    B-Rank: 45 meter radius maximum
    A-Rank: 70 meter radius maximum
    S-Rank: 100 meter radius maximum
    SS-Rank: 140 meter radius maximum


    For your first perk, the numbers are all good except X-Rank. Since X-Rank spells can only be used once per thread, that % breaks the rules. Please lower it to 18%, and you should be good to go. You can also lower all your cooldowns to 3 posts if you'd like, and up the numbers to the chart Hiroko provided at each rank. (So 10% at D, 16% at C, 23%, B, 25% at A, 25% at S, 23% at SS, and 18% at X).
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    Post by Norou Shikage Fri Feb 05, 2016 10:36 pm

    For your first perk, the numbers are all good except X-Rank. Since X-Rank spells can only be used once per thread, that % breaks the rules. Please lower it to 18%, and you should be good to go. You can also lower all your cooldowns to 3 posts if you'd like, and up the numbers to the chart Hiroko provided at each rank. (So 10% at D, 16% at C, 23%, B, 25% at A, 25% at S, 23% at SS, and 18% at X).

    Okay well lets just look at this for a moment and i'd like you to explain how you think that im going to have an SS rank spell that heals as much as a B rank spell and an X rank spell that heals for LESS than a B rank spell. Since there are no healing rules this point can actual be argued a bit until they are made.

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