Raiden (Finished)

General Information:
Name: Raiden "Ihsaad Al-Mee"
Nickname: Lord of Lightning, Hissing Static, Soaring Thunder, Rai, Rai-chan, Big Softy, Lovable Giant. Al, Al-Mee, Ihsaad-chan.
Age + Birthday: +450 years, Monday, September 7th. (Ageless)
Species: Dragonkin; Human & Storm Dragon Hybrid
Species Ability/Perk:

Perk 1
Dragon Biology (Wings): Due to his bloodline he is able to fly, seeing how he has a set of wings, these wings are always tucked under a flap of skin on his back. Allowing him to hide them when not in use, as well as to prevent any harm to come to them. His wings are a set of two wings, which are roughly 7 feet long when spread out, are roughly at least four feet from the fore-talon to the tips of his wings where the middle finger like extension ends. When the wings are folded up, they have a unique multi folding interlocking joint system that allow it to tuck in tighter to his body so he can place them under his flaps of skin.

Perk 2
Jumping Ability: Raiden unlike others has the ability to leap higher heights than most normal people, as his whole life he was put through vigorous training. His father trained him in the art of evasion/leaping, despite his large size, and weight. He is surprisingly agile and one to be able to leap higher than most normal humans, while most humans can jump 0.5588 meters or 1.83 feet, Raiden can leap a whopping 9.15 meters or 30 feet. And can travel at least 3.0 meter or 15 feet from a single leap. The more he training the better at his ability to jump highers will become. (When he ranks up, his strength will increase his ability to jump up another 15 feet and travel another 5 feet each jump.)

Special/Unique Characteristics:

1.) Eyes: Raiden's eyes are like many dragons, they have a slit much like a cats iris and this can change to a humans iris, a round one. The only time his eyes change from a humans iris to a dragons is when excited, angered, or happy.

2.) Muscular Body: Raiden's body is like any typical human body, and as such functions like one. but mostly what makes his body stand out is his excellent muscle tone. Raiden's body is a very muscular one and appears to be as though it is carved from marble, this shows that he is a well fit man. And offers nothing other than a great physical appearance.

3.) Scales: Are layered along the main limbs and other regions of the body, such as the face, brow, chin, jawline, neck, throat, shoulders, shoulder blades, arms, thighs, base of the spine and legs.

4.) Claws: Despite having human hands, his nails are another story, almost resembling a combination of a talon and a human nail. Though used only to remove abstract items from under his scales can be used as weapons, though not practical can cut flesh very well.

5.) Horns: Has upon the side of his head and along the crown of the cranium are horn like protrusions, on the side of his skull is two large reverse style ram horns. These horns are much like draconic horns but serve as a more higher purpose, these horns are used to attract a mate. (Was told I could keep this so long as they are just horns, which they are just that.)

6.) Tail: Has a scaly like tail that acts as a counterbalance for him when balancing, much like a cats, but also allows for another purpose as well. Much like his horns the more elegant the tail the more likely a mate will be attracted. This is the same colour as his scales and horns, jet black and is about 4 feet long.

7.) Scars: Has a few scars along his spine, and back from constant combat as well as a few on his chest and arms. Most of them are very hard to see, but ones that are very visible are located on his chest, and back. They both are about four inches long and look as a blade or claw slashed the flesh.

8.) Tattoo: Upon his cheekbones lies two tattoos that serve only as a personal meaning that Raiden has yet to reveal.

9.) Goggles: Raiden has been seen to wear a pair of goggles all the time, as it is to be a sort of eye protection from the elements, such as dust. Wind and water that could disrupt his vision, most of the time when not being worn they are resting on his forehead.

10.) Clothing: Raiden has been seen wearing very calm coloured fabrics, such as dark blues, greens, browns or various mixtures of the mentioned coloured. He tends to wear loose fitted clothing so it does not impair his movement.

Character Depth:
Personality:  

Everyday
A very intuitive and observant person, while retaining a accentuated by the clever and witty nature, producing a being much like his father, holding a sharp and deadly accurate instincts. Much like his father he is a quick and shrewd person that can easily make perfect judgments in the blink of an eye. Raiden prides himself on his meticulous nature, a strong work ethic, and highly energetic nature; however, there are times when he may become too bogged down in the details of the task and fail to visualize or complete the bigger picture. Furthermore, because he is such a perfectionists, he may end up procrastinating and fail to complete all the projects that Raiden sets out to complete. Most of the time, he uses the large supply of energy to get his job done even if it ends up being worked on at the last minute. While he has much energy he tends to relax after his work is completed, and oftentimes will withdraw and spend some time alone. Due to this he is prone to extreme changes in emotions, and when he is depleted of said energy, he can fall into the depths of despair. During his resting time, Raiden enjoys deeply emotional and intimate conversations with close friends, and quite enjoys expressing himself through art and writing.

In fact, Raiden often feels so emotionally strong that he is able to easily empathize with others and connect to them on a much deeper level. While he most often enjoy spending time with a few close friends, he does sometimes enjoy interacting a larger group, and of course, he also enjoy spending some time alone. He is also a very intelligent and can places strong emphasis on intellectual pursuits. When thinking and creating ideas, he tends to take a very objective approach and may at times seem a bit emotionally detached. Because of his strong objective nature, Raiden can communicate and express his ideas with mental agility; however, with so many theories, thoughts, and ideas running through his heads. Raiden as before said sometimes has trouble getting things done, but other times he can't stay grounded in reality. In fact, Raiden is a dreamer, constantly thinking but not always following through as well as others. Though this idealistic and impractical side of his personality is balanced by a rational, intellectual and logical nature, allowing him to analyze situations fully and plan carefully before he takes any sort of action.

While he may ponder and vacillate, he tries to rarely make any foolish mistakes, detached he maybe and not overly emotional at times, despite being a perfectionist. He is almost always objective and fair-minded though he can make quicker calls than he likes. He is very people-oriented but often more inclined toward the group than the individual when he feels the need to be this way. While retaining his nature much like his father, Raiden is a clever fellow much like his mother, he likes to learn about others, take small hints from them. Small little details that one would misplace as miscellaneous information and use it as his weapon. Though he is a decent fighter, and can fight in almost any situation, he prefers the more assertoric route and discover more. Though he likes to play mind games, and can be rather difficult to beat, he does allow others to take him by surprise, and he does often misplace certain information to challenge himself. He is often regarded as a sly, and impish person, his mind games are ones that involve him being quite and stature like. And willing to watch and wait, he has however been called kind, Raiden is also this as well, he is kind, caring, and very well verse in talking with others.

Frequently seen in cafe's conversing with the locals, and being a very friendly person. Though this is another way for him to gain info, but he isn't always trying to learn about his foe's weakness and try to overtake them. He does enjoy himself and indulge in the finer things in life, he does enjoy fine food, people and indulge in other acts. Though he prefers to keep those situations brief, and rarely ever tries to take a woman into his quarters, though he is a flirtatious person. Just because he wished not to woo a woman, and be with her for the night, doesn't mean he won't try to get close to her. He isn't naturally lustful and tends to be a romancer of sorts, he compliments them and always tries to stay on their good side. He does though retain a slight trust issue, having a hard time adjusting to new area's in fear that he might be attacked, or others being attacked. He can be well open, if you gain his trust, but also noted that constant bothering and bickering can cause certain negative effects. He does retain some form of a anger issue, he suffers mood swings from time to time, and this can cause him to suffer from chronic sadness. Anger, confusion, and depression at times, he could be happy as the bright sun, then switch to the darkest of nights and be at your throat. For this reason he tends to avoid negativity in mass quantities. But all in all, he is a wonderful person to be your ally, and to be a friend and more.

Battle
While unlike many people, Raiden is a rather complex person when it comes down to combat, as he doesn't have just one set personality when it comes to this. Since his whole being is derived around his emotions and how he is attuned with them all too well, things with him are abit complex. As his father has pointed out Raiden is what known as a "Powerhouse", he largely succeed through the energy put into both thinking and fighting. The way he does this is to use his body's natural ability to generate adrenaline under stress but then grab cognitive control from the emotions, sublimating suppressed rage into even more energy in delivery. This way Raiden retains rational control whilst being able to direct enormous energy to selected targets. As he is also a crafty thinkers, he can make it difficult to deceive and simply slipping around an attack, this may lead one into a carefully placed trap.  While this a wonderful style, if one targets his allies, family, friends or even loved ones, Raiden may end up changing, morphing into the way of the Berserker. When in this state of mind, Raiden is a force to be reckoned with, and is powered by pure rage towards the last person he saw harm his loved ones, friends, family etc.

When Raiden is like this, he loses all self-control, and turns into a primal beast like state, and induced with adrenaline. This arousal forces his mind to let the locks on his body go and grant him great power and speed. While cutting off the brains inhibitors to his nervous system, making him feel no pain. Even when he is wounded he is highly dangerous While this iis one state of mind Raiden may undergo, he can also suffer another one that is likely his most surprising one. If pushed when he is not angered, or isn't in the Berserker state of mind, he can become what is known as a ice warrior. This is a state of mind suffused with emotion which is channel into a deep, cold hatred of his enemy, Raiden in this state is very sly and deceptive in battle and will be cruel in his attacks. Often deliberately wounding an opponent to prolong their suffering, this is perhaps in endless revenge for a persistent past hurt. While this is a rare occurrence, it has happen twice in his past, but mostly along with his powerhouse personality, he tends to fight like a skilled soldier for whom fighting is a fine art. Each battle, each blow is an interesting problem to be quickly thought through logically and executed with fine skill. Each opponent is to be sized up, weaknesses identified and then efficiently dispatched. In some way this can be the most terrifying and inhuman state he could be, as more than 96% of the time he treats you as little more than another specimen.

Likes: (3 minimum)
- Sunny Days: Raiden is a person who is emotionally connected to the weather, and when the weather becomes rather sunny or gloomy his emotions reflect in this way. So when it is a sunny day, he is also quite sunny and happy, as well this not only makes him happy but allows for him to have some nice sun basking spots.

- Warm Climate: Raiden much like many draconic like children has a weakness towards colder weather and is prone to losing his body heat. So when the warmth comes around, he is more than happy to lounge about till his blood temperature rises to a more comfortable level.

- People: Raiden is a person who loves to interact with others, as such is his nature, for his is a naturally friendly person and tends to always converse with people when given the chance.

- ArtL Raiden finds art to be a expression of ones true feelings, emotions, and idea's that can't be explained through words. This to him is one of the most wonderful acts anyone can perform, and loves to gaze upon the art that people make. As he wishes to uncover what set person was trying to say.

- Literature: Much like his love for art, Raiden finds novels and books to be as similar to art but in more explainable text, while he can understand what someone is say in a story. He loves the worlds that people can make from the way they place certain phrases together. And this drives him to read more books, and visit more worlds in his mind.

- Animals: Raiden is a person who loves animals, as they are curious creatures to him and as such he wishes to understand them more. Even if he can't speak to them, he can still observe them and uncover more about them. Not only that, he loves spending time with them as they help him relax and unwind.

- Nature: There is beauty in nature, and Raiden knows this as he always is flying over a forest or a open valley.

Dislikes:
- Gloomy Days: Much like his love for sunny days, Raiden hates gloomy and dark days for this turns his chipper tone into a more depressed and less cheerful individual. So when there is a mass of dark clouds rolling over the region, you can bet Raiden is the first to feel the effects, as well as the first one to know when they are coming.

- Cold Climates: Much like his love for warmth and due to his bloodline cold climate is not a good element or environment for a half bred dragonkin. As his blood maybe warm, he can still suffer from cold blooded syndrome. Which put in simple, causes him to become induced into a comatose like state, as his body will begin to shut down and go into hibernation. If not placed in a location of 82 degree's or higher, Raiden is able to undergo cardiac arrest, seizures, organ failure and then death.

- Rudeness: To him rudeness is a way of showing bad manners, and as well make one look less dignified to another person. When someone is being rude to him Raiden will simple ask them kindly if they would please treat him with a little more respect And if they do not comply he will simple ignore them and leave the area.

- Atrocious Grammar: Raiden absolutely hates and will not stand for bad grammar or literature in any shape or form. He prefers the words that are said or written to be perfect in all shape and form. Many would call this a Grammar Nazi personality, but Raiden believes that we are to speak in perfect toned voices and should be done so in written or spoken form.

- Ignorance: Ignorance is a blight on the world like many things that show less intelligence, and not in the way that undermines another person. If one person is ignorant, and not aware of it, Raiden will simply educate them to understand abit more. But if one does understand that they are ignorant, but does not care, he will simply just let them be that way.

- Stupidity: Much like the stupidity, Raiden hates people who are stupid, and uneducated in any manner of form. If one is not trying to be stupid and are that way naturally he will not be as nit picky about it. But that does not follow when someone acts stupid for a few giggles, he will immediately, leave the area and not return til his mind is clear.

Fears:
- Arachnophobia (Fear): He absolutely hates Spiders and Scorpions, despite him being able to kill them with ease, never like how creepy they looked. If he see's one he will literally go Ape s%#t crazy and either plane A. Kill the bloody thing, or plan B. Run in the opposite direction.

- Insects: This one is specific in its nature, he hates Spiders, Scorpions, Wasps, Hornets, Yellow Jackets, Centipedes, and Millipedes.

- Dragon Slayers (Fear): Raiden was always told by his father to fear Dragon Slayers, as they can kill a dragon with little ease. Seeing how they are weak to them and he himself being a half dragon, is still susceptible to their powerful and deadly spells. (Double Damage by Dragon Slayer.)

Motivations/Goals:
- Family/Friends: Wishes to show others what he can do, and if he can earn the respect of people around him.

- The Unknown: Finding out what will happen in the future entices him very much, and he always hoped to see what the future will hold.

- Love: Finding love is one thing that keeps Raiden going, if he can be loved by another he is happy and he would expect to give love back as well.

Appearance:
Hair: Chocolate Brown
Eyes: Topaz Gold
Skin Tone: Dark Olive Brown, semi-flawless, covered in scales and a few horns.
Height: 1.9812 meters (6'2" ft.)
Weight: 111.13 kg (245 lbs.)
Overall Appearances:
Raiden is a tall young man who stands roughly six foot two inches, and weighs approximately two hundred and forty-five pounds. He bolsters a broad set of shoulders mounted upon a muscular physique, that holds a dark olive brown colour to it. He has pronounce chin and jawline, shoulders, and collarbone, much like his frame, it is well rounded and doesn't hold the appropriate amount of muscle. He has short dark chocolate brown hair that is fashioned in a messy and unkempt manner. Ihsaad or Raiden also retains a set of topaz gold eyes, he also has little to no facial hair. Other than the stubs on upper lip, there can also bee seen upon his face, a set of ornate tattoos under each of his cheek. Through out his frame he is covered in jet black scales that are one various parts of the epidermis, while also sporting a set of horns on his cranium. These are formed in a unique manner, almost representing ram horns, but not retaining the spiral shape and instead peek out in front of his face instead. He also has a few smaller ones throughout his hair that are angled at a forty-five degree tilt. While this is one of the few notable things about him, one should also note that he also holds a 4 foot long tale and a set of four wings. These wings are always kept under a flap of skin on his back, his smaller wings used for gliding and turning in flight. While his larger ones are his main source of transportation when not walking. 

Other:
Rank: D
Guild: Fairy Tail
Guild Tattoo White, and is located on the underside of the forearm.

RP Sample

Spoiler:

The jumping height and the strength both should probably be something that grows as you rank up. Right now, they're rather high.

Other than that, this is quite literally the most detailed and awesome app I've seen on this site so far.

Hmm, I'll approve, so this is open for second approval. I will, however, say that if I or anybody else catches you abusing the strength thing, it'll have to be lowered. I'm giving you a trust slil, don't rip it up ^.^

Hello there, I see you have been approved, that is great, however it is time for the second grading which will be assessed by myself. What this second grading does is finalizes your app so you can go post and be social. There is however something I will mention as of right now, do note that none of these are to attack you, it is simply just following the site's common assessment. Please try not to argue or anything else as explained before I am simply grading this like I would grade any other app now then your final grading!

Species and Abilities Perks:
Oh boy there is a lot here so I will do my best to break each part apart piece by piece hopefully you won't get lost.

Dragon Biology,alright first off having four wings is a no go, I have gotten on the case of two users now about multiple wings, you can only have two of which have to have a reasonable dimensions as wings are fairly heavy. Agility is a perk in it of itself so slipping it into this perk is a no go sorry.

Hightened Senses, I am not even gonna go into details, these are all perks of their own you can only have two perks maximum please pick two perks and leave it at that please. I don't think you were trying to find a loophole in our system but it seems that way and it honestly isn't tolerated so I know you weren't meaning to but there is no way myself or another staff member who does second grading will approve this.

Special Unique Characteristic:
Yet again i am gonna break this down piece by piece.

1.) Eyes, this is fine no problem with this at all

2.) Excellent Hand to Hand combat specialist, this is not a unique characteristic this is a perk and is in the wrong place, please fix this.

3.) Weapon Combat, yet again not a unique characteristic but more of a perk and in the wrong place.

4.) Anatomy, get rid of any and all perks with the anatomy, as those would be perks and not a unique characteristic.

5.) Scales, This is acceptable

6.) Claws, this is acceptable

7.) Horns, this is fine just get rid of this "These horns are much like draconic horns but serve as a more higher purpose. These horns are used to attract a mate, and to fend off other intruding male contenders. " This is just fluff and not needed.

8.) Tail, this is fine

9.) Scars, this is fine

10.) Tattoo, this is fine

11.) Goggles, this is fine

12.) Clothing, this is fine.

Personality:
you went above and beyond the word count and painted a rather nice picture, if you added any more to this honestly I would believe it would just be fluff so this is fine, no problems in this department.

Likes/Dislikes/Fears/Motivs:[/b
yet again you went above and beyond with this one so no complaints what so ever.

[b]Appearance:
I hate copy and pasting but....yet again you went above and beyond with this one so no complaints what so ever.

Other:
This is fine

Overall Opinion:
The perks and special characteristics need some serious revision the difference between perks and characteristics is this Perks are battle specific and used as abilities, Characteristics can not be used for abilities what so ever unless it is linked to the perk such as Wings be the characteristic and Flight being a perk, that is the only exception. Please fix this. Finally you did really well with everything else so once this is all edited and what not bump and I will review yet again.

UNLOCKED FOR REVISIONS

Good job on making the edits, this is approved.