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    Raina Lynna Vanille Scylar

    Raina
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    Raina Lynna Vanille Scylar 89wWcWF

    Posts : 34
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    Post by Raina Mon Sep 21, 2015 3:13 pm

    In-Site Information:

    General Information:
    Name: Raina Lynna Vanille Scylar
    Nickname: Princess, Seraphim
    Age + Birthday: April 16th, 18
    Species: Angel/Siren Hybrid
    Species Ability/Perk:

    • Seraphic Form: When needed Raina to sprout wings and unleash the true holy potential of her Seraphim heritage. She sprouts four beautiful wings and is able to fly. The wings split into different parts. Two small wings about one feet in length and width appear on her angles. Four larger wings are on her back. The wings are about 4 feet in length and 2 feet in width. This form lasts for 5 posts and has a cool down of 6. Raina is able to fly at approximately 30 MPH and cannot go higher then 30 feet up in the sky.  
    • Water Connection: When deeply emotional Raina's siren heritage connects with water and can cause it to bend to her will, mostly in the form of causing it to rain. This also grants Raina a passive boost to water based magic by 25%. Electric Based magic is 25% more effective AGAINST Raina. The rain has no combat related abilities.

    Special/Unique Characteristics: Incredibly Beautiful and Skins seems to Sparkle in the light. (Sparkling has NO effect in combat, its basically a glimmer)

    Due to Raina's Heritage stemming from being the Daughter of a Siren and an Angel, Raina seems to have an otherworldly beauty about her. Things you would normal assume are fake are perfectly real on her. This also causes her skin to shimmer in the light due to any sweat she may secrete glowing and causing her skin to have a natural glow.  

    Character Depth:
    Personality:Raina is a kind, bubbly, girl who hates to be mean or rude to anyone living being. The kind of girl that just has to make everyone feel better, whether she has to hug or glomp others to do it. She is a lover of magic and life in general. Even with her constant need to be kind, Raina is no pushover. She has a strong sense of justice and love for her friends and family. With a strong determination, only matched by her high intelligence, she faces any challenges thrown her way. Raina can be the most loyal friend you may have or the worst rival to face. She is not afraid to fight for what she believes in and will not give up, even if it means giving up her life. Raina presents a level of love and adornment for every living being, whether it be ally or enemy. She often apologizes for having to fight her enemies, wishing there was another way.

    Her love for everything is a great trait to her personality but can also be her greatest weakness if exploited correctly. Her high sense of morality, has had her deemed the title "The Princess". She hates to cause or see any bloodshed, and wishes to solve issues through talking first if she can. But if she can't do not think she will won't fight for what she believes in. Raina is highly respected member of society due to her confidence and attitude towards challenges. She is often seen helping the others believing they own abilities and strength. She is also seen planting new flowers and caring for stray animals through out the city, expressing her love for living things. Raina can not tell a lie to save her life. She believes it is not kind to deceive anyone and hates when people do it to her. She is not afraid to explain the issues of lying to fellow person.

    Raina gets along with others very well, but that does not mean she's a sheep. If she deems the need for her step up and help the leader in any way she will take it. And if there is no leader, she herself will stand up and take control when needed. She can be a very gentle but tough leader.

    Raina's personality comes from her life throwing her so many curve balls. Losing her family at such a young age has made her sheltered with her feelings. Sure she will be happy but it will take a lot of trust and love to crack the shell guarding her heart. But once that shell is removed you will never find a more loyal companion. A companion that would even die to protect the ones she loves. She once even jumped in front of a stray magic attack to protect a squirrel. This girl has is sweet as sugar and can evil cause diabetes. But make her angry and she will make you pay. Independence and spunky can also describe her.

    Likes: (3 minimum)
    - Sweets: As with most people, Raina has always adored sweets and they remind her of home.
    - Magic: Always being around it, Raina grew up with magic as her best friend.
    - Rain: This weather which grants her the name she was born with has always made her feel so relaxed.

    Dislikes: (3 minimum)
    - Darkness: Raina's twin sister Aria was corrupted by an evil darkness.
    - Spiders: These little hell spawns have always creeped Raina out.
    - Mean People: Raina feels like people should always be nice and try their best to treat people well.

    Fears: (3 minimum)
    - Loss of Her sister: Even though her sister is corrupted and evil, Raina cannot bare the thought of killing her.
    - To be Corrupted: Raina has seen the bloodshed caused by her sister's corruption and wishes to never have that in her life.
    - To be Alone: Raina has always been a bit lonely and love seems more like a dream to her.

    Motivations/Goals: (3 minimum)
    - Justice: Raina has always had a drive for justice and to protect the people who cannot. It is the reason she joined the guild in the first place.
    - Love: Even with the amount of loneliness she has been dealt, Raina still has an unbelievable amount of love for the people of the world. It drives her to help those she can.
    - To Save Her Sister: One day, Raina wishes to be strong enough to Purify her sister, The Demon Aria.

    Appearance:
    Hair: Pink
    Eyes:Crimson
    Skin Tone: Sun Kissed Tan
    Height: 5'2
    Weight: 110 Lbs.
    Overall Appearances: Raina is a short but lean girl with a decent size bust, and a athletic body. Years of training has given her arms and legs definition, but not body builder muscles. Her body is trained with physical prowess, and mental strength.

    Her eyes look of wisdom and kindness, but are contrasted by the fiery crimson they express. Some people refer to her eyes are a sign of her determination. Her hair rains down her back like a waterfall, falling to just under her knees. It is a shade of bright pink and gives a sense of royality.

    Raina normally wears a white bady doll dress with a golden ornamental belt around the waist. A long white fingerless glove is on her right arm and is contrasted by the golden winged bracers that go up it. She wears pink stockings and short white boots. A White bow is normally seen in her hair sometimes pulling it into a ponytail.

    Raina constantly likes to wear bright colors and frilly dresses, believing that she as a woman can do anything a man can do, but while wearing a dress. She hates to wear pants. Her signature colors are white, gold, pink, and red.

    While on the beach she wears a two piece bikini that is red, white, and frilly. Along her arms and legs are bracelets that shimmer with the water and sunshine.

    When she is enduring a harsh weather that makes her cold, she wears a long red cloak and long boots instead of her regular shoes.

    Lately She has adorned one piece style angelic armor the colors of gold and snow. It barely covers her chest and stops right at her thighs. Angelic feathers are attached to the sides and flow as she walks.


    Other:
    Rank: D (Applying for S when available)
    Guild: Sabertooth
    Guild Tattoo White and on her Left hand

    Rp Sample:


    Last edited by Raina on Mon Sep 28, 2015 11:11 pm; edited 5 times in total
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    Post by Kosovo Misogi Mon Sep 21, 2015 7:20 pm

    Corrections in RED

    Raina wrote:
    In-Site Information:

    General Information:
    Name: Raina Lynna Vanille Scylar
    Nickname: Princess, Seraphim
    Age + Birthday: April 16th, 18
    Species: Angel/Siren Hybrid
    Species Ability/Perk:

    • Seraphic Form: When needed Raina to sprout wings and unleash the true holy potential of her Seraphim heritage. She sprouts eight beautiful wings and is able to fly. It also increases the power of her holy based spells by 25%. Dark Based magic is 25% more effective AGAINST Raina. Need a lot more detail form this form. Not to mention need a Duration AND a cooldown. Descrivbe the wings, give the maximum flight height,speed and distance. Essentially, details.
    • Water Connection: When deeply emotional Raina's siren heritage connects with water and can cause it to bend to her will, mostly in the form of causing it to rain. This also grants Raina a passive boost to water based magic by 25%. Electric Based magic is 25% more effective AGAINST Raina. Again, details. What constitutes 'deep emotion'. How long does this last, how long does it take for this to activate again. How far does the rain spread, how hard does it fall? does it lower visibility? does it hinder sound? Details, details, details.

    Special/Unique Characteristics: Incredibly Beautiful and Skins seems to Sparkle in the light. How bright do you sparkle? this is actually important cause I would purposefully blind people with this in combat if I was allowed to >.>. details.

    Character Depth:
    Personality:Raina is a kind, bubbly, girl who hates to be mean or rude to anyone living being. The kind of girl that just has to make everyone feel better, whether she has to hug or glomp others to do it. She is a lover of magic and life in general. Even with her constant need to be kind, Raina is no pushover. She has a strong sense of justice and love for her friends and family. With a strong determination, only matched by her high intelligence, she faces any challenges thrown her way. Raina can be the most loyal friend you may have or the worst rival to face. She is not afraid to fight for what she believes in and will not give up, even if it means giving up her life. Raina presents a level of love and adornment for every living being, whether it be ally or enemy. She often apologizes for having to fight her enemies, wishing there was another way.

    Her love for everything is a great trait to her personality but can also be her greatest weakness if exploited correctly. Her high sense of morality, has had her deemed the title "The Princess". She hates to cause or see any bloodshed, and wishes to solve issues through talking first if she can. But if she can't do not think she will won't fight for what she believes in. Raina is highly respected member of society due to her confidence and attitude towards challenges. She is often seen helping the others believing they own abilities and strength. She is also seen planting new flowers and caring for stray animals through out the city, expressing her love for living things. Raina can not tell a lie to save her life. She believes it is not kind to deceive anyone and hates when people do it to her. She is not afraid to explain the issues of lying to fellow person.

    Raina gets along with others very well, but that does not mean she's a sheep. If she deems the need for her step up and help the leader in any way she will take it. And if there is no leader, she herself will stand up and take control when needed. She can be a very gentle but tough leader.

    Raina's personality comes from her life throwing her so many curve balls. Losing her family at such a young age has made her sheltered with her feelings. Sure she will be happy but it will take a lot of trust and love to crack the shell guarding her heart. But once that shell is removed you will never find a more loyal companion. A companion that would even die to protect the ones she loves. She once even jumped in front of a stray magic attack to protect a squirrel. This girl has is sweet as sugar and can evil cause diabetes. But make her angry and she will make you pay. Independence and spunky can also describe her.

    Likes: (3 minimum)
    - Sweets: As with most people, Raina has always adored sweets and they remind her of home.
    - Magic: Always being around it, Raina grew up with magic as her best friend.
    - Rain: This weather which grants her the name she was born with has always made her feel so relaxed.

    Dislikes: (3 minimum)
    - Darkness: Raina's twin sister Aria was corrupted by an evil darkness.
    - Spiders: These little hell spawns have always creeped Raina out.
    - Mean People: Raina feels like people should always be nice and try their best to treat people well.

    Fears: (3 minimum)
    - Loss of Her sister: Even though her sister is corrupted and evil, Raina cannot bare the thought of killing her.
    - To be Corrupted: Raina has seen the bloodshed caused by her sister's corruption and wishes to never have that in her life.
    - To be Alone: Raina has always been a bit lonely and love seems more like a dream to her.

    Motivations/Goals: (3 minimum)
    - Justice: Raina has always had a drive for justice and to protect the people who cannot. It is the reason she joined the guild in the first place.
    - Love: Even with the amount of loneliness she has been dealt, Raina still has an unbelievable amount of love for the people of the world. It drives her to help those she can.
    - To Save Her Sister: One day, Raina wishes to be strong enough to Purify her sister, The Demon Aria.

    Appearance:
    Hair: Pink
    Eyes:Crimson
    Skin Tone: Sun Kissed Tan
    Height: 5'2
    Weight: 110 Lbs.
    Overall Appearances: Raina is a short but lean girl with a decent size bust, and a athletic body. Years of training has given her arms and legs definition, but not body builder muscles. Her body is trained with physical prowess, and mental strength.

    Her eyes look of wisdom and kindness, but are contrasted by the fiery crimson they express. Some people refer to her eyes are a sign of her determination. Her hair rains down her back like a waterfall, falling to just under her knees. It is a shade of bright pink and gives a sense of royality.

    Raina normally wears a white bady doll dress with a golden ornamental belt around the waist. A long white fingerless glove is on her right arm and is contrasted by the golden winged bracers that go up it. She wears pink stockings and short white boots. A White bow is normally seen in her hair sometimes pulling it into a ponytail.

    Raina constantly likes to wear bright colors and frilly dresses, believing that she as a woman can do anything a man can do, but while wearing a dress. She hates to wear pants. Her signature colors are white, gold, pink, and red.

    While on the beach she wears a two piece bikini that is red, white, and frilly. Along her arms and legs are bracelets that shimmer with the water and sunshine.

    When she is enduring a harsh weather that makes her cold, she wears a long red cloak and long boots instead of her regular shoes.

    Lately She has adorned one piece style angelic armor the colors of gold and snow. It barely covers her chest and stops right at her thighs. Angelic feathers are attached to the sides and flow as she walks.


    Other:
    Rank: D (Applying for S when available)
    Guild: Black Airs
    Guild Tattoo White and on her Left hand

    Rp Sample:
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    Raina Lynna Vanille Scylar 89wWcWF

    Posts : 34
    Join date : 2015-09-21

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    Post by Raina Mon Sep 21, 2015 7:37 pm

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    Post by Kosovo Misogi Mon Sep 21, 2015 7:41 pm

    Raina wrote:
    In-Site Information:

    General Information:
    Name: Raina Lynna Vanille Scylar
    Nickname: Princess, Seraphim
    Age + Birthday: April 16th, 18
    Species: Angel/Siren Hybrid
    Species Ability/Perk:

    • Seraphic Form: When needed Raina to sprout wings and unleash the true holy potential of her Seraphim heritage. She sprouts eight beautiful wings and is able to fly. It also increases the power of her holy based spells by 25%. Dark Based magic is 25% more effective AGAINST Raina. This form lasts for 5 posts and has a cool down of 6. Raina is able to fly at approximately 15 MPH and cannot go higher then 30 feet up in the sky.  The holy boost stays in effect, even during cool down, as it is a passive ability.
    • Water Connection: When deeply emotional Raina's siren heritage connects with water and can cause it to bend to her will, mostly in the form of causing it to rain. This also grants Raina a passive boost to water based magic by 25%. Electric Based magic is 25% more effective AGAINST Raina. The rain has no combat related abilities.

    Special/Unique Characteristics: Incredibly Beautiful and Skins seems to Sparkle in the light. (Sparkling has NO effect in combat, its basically a glimmer)

    Character Depth:
    Personality:Raina is a kind, bubbly, girl who hates to be mean or rude to anyone living being. The kind of girl that just has to make everyone feel better, whether she has to hug or glomp others to do it. She is a lover of magic and life in general. Even with her constant need to be kind, Raina is no pushover. She has a strong sense of justice and love for her friends and family. With a strong determination, only matched by her high intelligence, she faces any challenges thrown her way. Raina can be the most loyal friend you may have or the worst rival to face. She is not afraid to fight for what she believes in and will not give up, even if it means giving up her life. Raina presents a level of love and adornment for every living being, whether it be ally or enemy. She often apologizes for having to fight her enemies, wishing there was another way.

    Her love for everything is a great trait to her personality but can also be her greatest weakness if exploited correctly. Her high sense of morality, has had her deemed the title "The Princess". She hates to cause or see any bloodshed, and wishes to solve issues through talking first if she can. But if she can't do not think she will won't fight for what she believes in. Raina is highly respected member of society due to her confidence and attitude towards challenges. She is often seen helping the others believing they own abilities and strength. She is also seen planting new flowers and caring for stray animals through out the city, expressing her love for living things. Raina can not tell a lie to save her life. She believes it is not kind to deceive anyone and hates when people do it to her. She is not afraid to explain the issues of lying to fellow person.

    Raina gets along with others very well, but that does not mean she's a sheep. If she deems the need for her step up and help the leader in any way she will take it. And if there is no leader, she herself will stand up and take control when needed. She can be a very gentle but tough leader.

    Raina's personality comes from her life throwing her so many curve balls. Losing her family at such a young age has made her sheltered with her feelings. Sure she will be happy but it will take a lot of trust and love to crack the shell guarding her heart. But once that shell is removed you will never find a more loyal companion. A companion that would even die to protect the ones she loves. She once even jumped in front of a stray magic attack to protect a squirrel. This girl has is sweet as sugar and can evil cause diabetes. But make her angry and she will make you pay. Independence and spunky can also describe her.

    Likes: (3 minimum)
    - Sweets: As with most people, Raina has always adored sweets and they remind her of home.
    - Magic: Always being around it, Raina grew up with magic as her best friend.
    - Rain: This weather which grants her the name she was born with has always made her feel so relaxed.

    Dislikes: (3 minimum)
    - Darkness: Raina's twin sister Aria was corrupted by an evil darkness.
    - Spiders: These little hell spawns have always creeped Raina out.
    - Mean People: Raina feels like people should always be nice and try their best to treat people well.

    Fears: (3 minimum)
    - Loss of Her sister: Even though her sister is corrupted and evil, Raina cannot bare the thought of killing her.
    - To be Corrupted: Raina has seen the bloodshed caused by her sister's corruption and wishes to never have that in her life.
    - To be Alone: Raina has always been a bit lonely and love seems more like a dream to her.

    Motivations/Goals: (3 minimum)
    - Justice: Raina has always had a drive for justice and to protect the people who cannot. It is the reason she joined the guild in the first place.
    - Love: Even with the amount of loneliness she has been dealt, Raina still has an unbelievable amount of love for the people of the world. It drives her to help those she can.
    - To Save Her Sister: One day, Raina wishes to be strong enough to Purify her sister, The Demon Aria.

    Appearance:
    Hair: Pink
    Eyes:Crimson
    Skin Tone: Sun Kissed Tan
    Height: 5'2
    Weight: 110 Lbs.
    Overall Appearances: Raina is a short but lean girl with a decent size bust, and a athletic body. Years of training has given her arms and legs definition, but not body builder muscles. Her body is trained with physical prowess, and mental strength.

    Her eyes look of wisdom and kindness, but are contrasted by the fiery crimson they express. Some people refer to her eyes are a sign of her determination. Her hair rains down her back like a waterfall, falling to just under her knees. It is a shade of bright pink and gives a sense of royality.

    Raina normally wears a white bady doll dress with a golden ornamental belt around the waist. A long white fingerless glove is on her right arm and is contrasted by the golden winged bracers that go up it. She wears pink stockings and short white boots. A White bow is normally seen in her hair sometimes pulling it into a ponytail.

    Raina constantly likes to wear bright colors and frilly dresses, believing that she as a woman can do anything a man can do, but while wearing a dress. She hates to wear pants. Her signature colors are white, gold, pink, and red.

    While on the beach she wears a two piece bikini that is red, white, and frilly. Along her arms and legs are bracelets that shimmer with the water and sunshine.

    When she is enduring a harsh weather that makes her cold, she wears a long red cloak and long boots instead of her regular shoes.

    Lately She has adorned one piece style angelic armor the colors of gold and snow. It barely covers her chest and stops right at her thighs. Angelic feathers are attached to the sides and flow as she walks.


    Other:
    Rank: D (Applying for S when available)
    Guild: Black Airs
    Guild Tattoo White and on her Left hand

    Rp Sample:

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    Post by Zed The Workaholic Mon Sep 21, 2015 11:01 pm

    Hello there, I see you have been approved, that is great, however it is time for the second grading which will be assessed by myself. What this second grading does is finalizes your app so you can go post and be social. There is however something I will mention as of right now, do note that none of these are to attack you, it is simply just following the site's common assessment. Please try not to argue or anything else as explained before I am simply grading this like I would grade any other app now then your final grading!

    Species and Abilities Perks:
    Seraphic Form, alright couple issues with this ability first off eight wings. . .that is a no go, I recently got on the case of a user having angel wings to begin with as angel wings are physically really heavy to carry, I allowed them but they had to be a reasonable height and width. Like with you I can allow wings however eight wings is a no go unless however the wings physically are connected and just appear to be separate that is a whole new story. Second I would like the dimensions of the wings as explained before please be reasonable about it. Finally holy boost sounds like another perk of it's own and unfortunately you have two perks as is I can't allow the third please pick between the three after you have fixed them of course.

    Water Connection, so what I am understanding from this, it is just a weather change perk based on a sad emotion in which boosts water magic by 25% but makes you more weak to electric type magic by 25% That works for me I suppose, rather interesting though it would only have to work in a sad state but it is your character.

    Special Unique Characteristic:
    "Incredibly Beautiful and Skins seems to Sparkle in the light." This is beyond vague, please add more description to this, why does your character's skin sparkle in the light why is she incredibly beautiful where does she get the attributes from, just claiming she is is just vague please add a little more detail here and you will be fine.

    Personality:
    In all honesty it is a pretty well descriptive personality, it paints a rather nice picture however there are some grammatical errors that mess with me in the personality but I will let it slide as that is just fluff to the overall grading of this application. now then well done, and you even went above and beyond with the word count so kudos!

    Likes/Dislikes/Fears/Motivs:
    In all honesty you are the only one I have seen, other than myself, give actual reasoning to why your character likes this, or dislikes that, ect. So good job I have no complaints here what so ever.

    Appearance:
    Well done painting a picture of your character yet again you went above and beyond so good job, it was vague in some areas but hey it is an optional area so I can't mark you down for that, you tried and for that I praise you.

    Other:
    This is fine upon approval I will keep you up to date for the tryouts for the higher ranks till then this is all set.

    Overall Opinion:
    Honestly I enjoyed this app it had a few issues but other than that you went above and beyond with your character app and that is really good so congrats on that, once you make the necessary changes on your character I will have no problem approving this application. GOOD JOB!
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    Post by Raina Mon Sep 21, 2015 11:09 pm

    Edited!
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    Post by Zed The Workaholic Mon Sep 21, 2015 11:11 pm

    Uh how does one fly with wings that are floating around their body and not physically attached to them. . .that doesn't make much sense
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    Post by Raina Mon Sep 21, 2015 11:18 pm

    Edited!
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    Post by Zed The Workaholic Mon Sep 21, 2015 11:20 pm

    I'm sure you meant ankles but hey you are all set now, moving and changing your color!

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