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    Post by RockLegendRyu Wed Sep 09, 2015 10:46 pm

    Name: Ryujin A. Fudani

    Nickname: Ryu, Rock Legend, the Rockstar, the Guitarist

    Age: Hes supposed to be an android so hes technically ageless with an unknown year of creation. Is made to look about 21 years old.

    Species: Android

    Species Ability/Perk: (Please note, Raiden helped to create these powers)

    Database: Basically like a brain but it is a gigantic storage space for information. Is a wireless information HUD, that is constantly adapting, gathering new Intel and saving it in a storage bank; kinda like a photo-graphic memory. This ability does not include; whispering, muffled sounds (such as through door or walls unless the volume is louder than normal), peripherals cannot be focused on, through obscure conditions; such as intense rain, pure darkness, intense light, smoke, mist ect., small spaces such as crack or hole too small to visible see through.

    Anti-Gravitational Flux Capacitors (aka Flight): A device located within the abdominal region of his body, that expands towards each limb using a set of ethereal energy absorbing canals and tubs, that are connected to a port upon the center of his hands, and base of his feet which consists of two extra ports. These ports consistently absorb non-consumed ethereal energy when he is not applying his own stored energy. When not using internal magical energy he can levitate at max 10 feet off the ground.

    Special/Unique Characteristics: When processing information, if his eyes are looked at, the pupil of the eye becomes gear shaped. His upper chest (pectoral muscles) are also sound system speakers. In his back is a 1/4 jack port for his electric guitar.

    Character Depth:

    Personality: Ryu is an android, which means he doesnt really have a "personality" however, this does not mean he cannot fake one or obtain new data on possible personalities and adapt to his new environment. He definitely learned to "love" the emo personality and has applied that to his musical talent he was programmed with. Ryu always has a guitar slung across his back and plugged into his back so he can amplify the sound of his electric guitar. When in combat, he always acts like its a big performance day and takes no time to set up, but he has to dance and sing to his own music in order to stay in the groove of the battle. However out of combat, he doesnt engage in conversation first and is rather socially awkward. He doesnt talk with a standard tone unless he mimics it from other people hes met before and when he does talk its usually trying to get people away from him. Hes a very determined "person" since he like to take a lot of the missions the guild has by himself. His teamwork needs help but he is very protective as well, he would rather put himself at risk to defend his guild mates than standby and watch them struggle to fight on. He is fairly intelligent, kinda in his programming to be, yet there is a lot to the world he barely understands. He is synthetic but he gives off a very human aroma, mostly to throw off all other races and species that have an increased sense of smell. Giving off the fake smell should cause them to think he is human and make him seem like less of a machine. Ryu also has a lack of emotions which means he doesnt feel joy, or sadness, or anger, nor does he get irritated or feel pain, which in a way make it better for him. This being who he is it makes him very hard to make friends or any sort of relationships. He tends to also remain away from the guild hall as long as possible because he knows that there is nothing there but money, and the only thing he uses money for is magical instruments and other than that has no need to be at the guild hall since most others dont really like him.

    Likes: (3 minimum)
    - Am Chord, just a tone that speaks to his "soul"

    - Being on stage: Being on stage makes him "feel alive" since its the only time where he can interact with fans and or be himself as an android with a humans brain.

    - His Fans: Being a rockstar is hard work, especially when you have almost no need for money, but Ryu is a one man performing act and can play any instrument known to man. His biggest success and greatest want is to be the best musical performer in the world and share his glory with his fans worldwide.

    Dislikes: (3 minimum)
    - Being interrupted, especially while on stage. He things this is absolutely one of the rudest things a person could do.

    - Breaking a string, especially when someone breaks it on purpose. When he breaks a string it just unnerves him and throws off his groove.

    - Obsessive Fans. He doesnt much like when fans chant out things like "have my babies" and :meet me backstage after the concert" or even the ones that stalk him and continue to bother him after being asked politely to go away. However he does not shy away from signing autographs or taking pictures.

    -Paparazzi or The Press. News reporters are always spreading lies and are only telling half truths, and never the good half, so he avoids the press like the plague and doesnt like formal pictures.

    Fears: (3 minimum)

    -Rejection- nothing hurts worse than when some one hates for a dumb reason, such as just to hate on someone, or when everyone you think likes you, turns out to have never liked you at all.

    -Losing- Ryu was designed to never give up, even if the fight was way too much for him in the first place, but in the even that someone is able to push Ryu to admit defeat, he will hate himself forever, and fear he may never recover from a loss.

    - Systems Failure (aka Death)- No one likes death, its not in anyones nature to just want to die and even for this android, he knows that death is the inevitable outcome, he still does not wish it to become a reality.

    Motivations/Goals: (3 minimum)

    - To bring the world together: He has been programmed to follow the wants and dreams of the brain that gave him functionality. This particular brain wanted to become a world famous musician through any means necessary, and wanted to use music to bring the world together in harmony (enough with the music jokes or ill get in treble).

    - To obtain ultimate power: Secretly through his magical abilities and desires, a hidden desire of his is to become basically a god in the world. His goal to never lose will continue to push his body to the point where it it might destroy itself before it gives in to any opponent.

    - To fall in love: Now where Ryu is actually an Android, his human side (mostly his brain) wants to understand what love truly is and potentially have a family. Its rather weird but once he gets used to certain people and have some what of a commitment to liking them, he begins to do stupid things around them such as taking fatal blows or dare devilish stunts

    Appearance:

    Hair: Black

    Eyes: Blue

    Skin Tone: Standard Caucasian

    Height: 180 cm (5'11")

    Weight: 79.4 kg (175 lbs)

    Overall Appearances: Typically scene wearing black on black, like a plain black tee shirt or a pair of black jeans, which usually have a belt. Usually always has a jacket as well which is brown leather and is worn all year round, when he decides to wear it that is. He always carries a guitar on his back (which the founder has allowed but it has no magic abilities...yet). (I have been informed by the founder of the site that i MAY own and carry the guitar so long as it has no magical advantages, thank you.)

    Other:
    Rank: D
    Guild: Fairy Tail
    Guild Tattoo Back of the Neck


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    Post by RockLegendRyu Fri Sep 11, 2015 1:16 pm

    bump
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    Post by Zed The Workaholic Sat Sep 12, 2015 10:21 am

    Hello Guest, I will be discussing with you on your app.  Anything that is out of place or needs editing will be in this color. Hope that you understand that there will be no biased grading on this application, any and all issues dealt with on this app is strictly based on the rules of this site.  Now then without further adieu, your over all assessment.

    Name: Ryujin A. Fudani

    Nickname: Ryu, Rock Legend, the Rockstar, the Guitarist

    Age: April 21 ????

    Species: Android
    Small little issue please provide the actual age of the character not the birth date, as saying April 21, is very vague and gives no specific age to your character.

    Species Ability/Perk: Nano-Mech: Tiny machines confined in his body continuously repair and rebuild parts of his body, including if limbs go missing or if there is internal damage the nano-mechs jump to action and begin repairing at once, however they have an order of importance starting with interior damage, then cranial damage, lower body damage, upper body damage.

    This is very vague nor does it go into description to how much magic it takes for minor, major, and critical injuries please go more in depth into this for example. How much magic does it take for the nano machines to work please note that the nano machines do not work on their own it is done by magic thus once healing yourself you are using magic you could be using to battle as automatic healing would be wayyyyy too much

    Optical sensor-ship: His eyes begin mechanical, have the ability to scan for magical being and magical users, with the enhanced ability to see what type of magic the magic user/creature can use.

    I'm gonna go ahead and say no to this one for many reasons first, new magic gets used everyday there is no possible way of you figuring out the new magic that is being used, you never went into detail about how you obtained the information on the magic, you never went into detail how the eyes function I.E magic consumption and never stated the distance, because of this reason I will have to say no to this feature as it pretty much is practically impossible to do as you would need the information from somewhere and as soon as your character is made new magic will be made there is no way to tell what magic that is IC.

    Special/Unique Characteristics: When using optical sensor-ship, if his eyes are looked at, the pupil of the eye becomes gear shaped. His upper chest (pectoral muscles) are also sound system speakers.
    Acceptable provided you fix your optical perk

    Character Depth:
    Personality: Ryu is an android, which means he doesnt really have a "personality" however, this does not mean he cannot fake one or obtain new data on possible personalities and adapt to his new environment. He definitely learned to "love" the emo personality and has applied that to his musical talent he was programmed with. Ryu always has a guitar slung across his back and plugged into his back so he can amplify the sound of his electric guitar.

    When in combat, he always acts like its a big performance day and takes no time to set up but has to dance and sing to his own music in order to stay in the groove of the battle. However out of combat, he doesnt engage in conversation first and is rather socially awkward.

    I'm gonna quote the template rules here, "350 words minimum. This includes how your character acts in and outside battle." When running your information through a word counter I only got 133, you did not reach the minimum please expand on this topic.



    Likes: (3 minimum)
    - Am Chord, just a tone that speaks to his "soul"

    - Being on stage: Being on stage makes him "feel alive" since its the only time where he can interact with fans and or be himself as an android with a humans brain.

    - His Fans: Being a rockstar is hard work, especially when you have almost no need for money, but Ryu is a one man performing act and can play any instrument known to man. His biggest success and greatest want is to be the best musical performer in the world and share his glory with his fans worldwide.

    Dislikes: (3 minimum)
    - Being interrupted, especially while on stage. He things this is absolutely one of the rudest things a person could do.

    - Breaking a string, especially when someone breaks it on purpose. When he breaks a string it just unnerves him and throws off his groove.

    - Obsessive Fans. He doesnt much like when fans chant out things like "have my babies" and :meet me backstage after the concert" or even the ones that stalk him and continue to bother him after being asked politely to go away. However he does not shy away from signing autographs or taking pictures.

    -Paparazzi or The Press. News reporters are always spreading lies and are only telling half truths, and never the good half, so he avoids the press like the plague and doesnt like formal pictures.

    Fears: (3 minimum)

    -Rejection- nothing hurts worse than when some one hates for a dumb reason, such as just to hate on someone, or when everyone you think likes you, turns out to have never liked you at all.

    -Losing- Ryu was designed to never give up, even if the fight was way too much for him in the first place, but in the even that someone is able to push Ryu to admit defeat, he will hate himself forever, and fear he may never recover from a loss.

    - Systems Failure (aka Death)- No one likes death, its not in anyones nature to just want to die and even for this android, he knows that death is the inevitable outcome, he still does not wish it to become a reality.

    Motivations/Goals: (3 minimum)

    - To bring the world together: He has been programmed to follow the wants and dreams of the brain that gave him functionality. This particular brain wanted to become a world famous musician through any means necessary, and wanted to use music to bring the world together in harmony (enough with the music jokes or ill get in treble).

    - To obtain ultimate power: Secretly through his magical abilities and desires, a hidden desire of his is to become basically a god in the world. His goal to never lose will continue to push his body to the point where it it might destroy itself before it gives in to any opponent.

    - To fall in love: Now where Ryu is actually an Android, his human side (mostly his brain) wants to understand what love truly is and potentially have a family. Its rather weird but once he gets used to certain people and have some what of a commitment to liking them, he begins to do stupid things around them such as taking fatal blows or dare devilish stunts
    Acceptable

    Appearance:
    Hair: Black

    Eyes: Blue

    Skin Tone: Standard Caucasian

    Height: 180 cm (5'11")

    Weight: 79.4 kg (175 lbs)

    Overall Appearances: Typically scene wearing black on black, like a plain black tee shirt or a pair of black jeans, which usually have a belt. Usually always has a jacket as well which is brown leather and is worn all year round, when he decides to wear it that is. He always carries a guitar on his back (which the founder has allowed but it has no magic abilities...yet).
    This is fine but you can't start off with the guitar it must be made or bought first no one starts out with items even if their app says so.

    Other:
    Rank: D
    This is fine

    Guild: (What guild do you wish to join?)
    Guild Tattoo (Where is your guild tattoo located and what color is it?)

    You need to put the guild your character is in and what color the guild tattoo is as well as it's location as being guild-less right now is not an option

    Overall Assessment:
    Overall this application is short and lacking depth and in my opinion you should give more detail into the perks as they are extremely vague. You have some major changes you need to make as the application seemed rather lacking in creativity, not to offend just my overall asssessment. I look forward to reading your editing. I or another staff member will assess this once more once changes have been made. Thank you for reading and understanding.
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    Post by RockLegendRyu Sun Sep 13, 2015 1:22 am

    bump again
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    Post by Krow Mon Sep 14, 2015 5:57 pm

    Hey there, the Almighty Krow-sama here, I will be grading your character app today.
    All needed changes or improvements will look like this.
    RockLegendRyu wrote:Name: Ryujin A. Fudani

    Nickname: Ryu, Rock Legend, the Rockstar, the Guitarist

    Age: Hes supposed to be an android so hes technically ageless with an unknown year of creation. Is made to look about 21 years old.

    Species: Android

    Species Ability/Perk: (Please note, Raiden helped to create these powers)

    Database: Basically like a brain but it is a gigantic storage space for information. Is a wireless information HUD, that is constantly adapting, gathering new Intel and information, using wireless interfaces that are throughout his cellular lobes of his "brain" that connects to any network within 100 meter.

    Anti-Gravitational Flux Capacitors (aka Flight): A device located within the abdominal region of his body, that expands towards each limb using a set of ethereal energy absorbing canals and tubs, that are connected to a port upon the center of his hands, and base of his feet which consists of two extra ports. These ports consistently absorb non-consumed ethereal energy when he is not applying his own stored energy. When not using internal magical energy he can levitate at max 10 feet off the ground.

    Special/Unique Characteristics: When processing information, if his eyes are looked at, the pupil of the eye becomes gear shaped. His upper chest (pectoral muscles) are also sound system speakers. In his back is a 1/4 jack port for his electric guitar.

    Character Depth:

    Personality: Ryu is an android, which means he doesnt really have a "personality" however, this does not mean he cannot fake one or obtain new data on possible personalities and adapt to his new environment. He definitely learned to "love" the emo personality and has applied that to his musical talent he was programmed with. Ryu always has a guitar slung across his back and plugged into his back so he can amplify the sound of his electric guitar.

    When in combat, he always acts like its a big performance day and takes no time to set up, but he has to dance and sing to his own music in order to stay in the groove of the battle. However out of combat, he doesnt engage in conversation first and is rather socially awkward. He doesnt talk with a standard tone unless he mimics it from other people hes met before and when he does talk its usually trying to get people away from him. Hes a very determined "person" since he like to take a lot of the missions the guild has by himself. His teamwork needs help but he is very protective as well, he would rather put himself at risk to defend his guild mates than standby and watch them struggle to fight on. He is fairly intelligent, kinda in his programming to be, yet there is a lot to the world he barely understands.

    Your personality is still 113 words short of the minimum allowance of 350 words, please expand upon it.

    Likes: (3 minimum)
    - Am Chord, just a tone that speaks to his "soul"

    - Being on stage: Being on stage makes him "feel alive" since its the only time where he can interact with fans and or be himself as an android with a humans brain.

    - His Fans: Being a rockstar is hard work, especially when you have almost no need for money, but Ryu is a one man performing act and can play any instrument known to man. His biggest success and greatest want is to be the best musical performer in the world and share his glory with his fans worldwide.

    Dislikes: (3 minimum)
    - Being interrupted, especially while on stage. He things this is absolutely one of the rudest things a person could do.

    - Breaking a string, especially when someone breaks it on purpose. When he breaks a string it just unnerves him and throws off his groove.

    - Obsessive Fans. He doesnt much like when fans chant out things like "have my babies" and :meet me backstage after the concert" or even the ones that stalk him and continue to bother him after being asked politely to go away. However he does not shy away from signing autographs or taking pictures.

    -Paparazzi or The Press. News reporters are always spreading lies and are only telling half truths, and never the good half, so he avoids the press like the plague and doesnt like formal pictures.

    Fears: (3 minimum)

    -Rejection- nothing hurts worse than when some one hates for a dumb reason, such as just to hate on someone, or when everyone you think likes you, turns out to have never liked you at all.

    -Losing- Ryu was designed to never give up, even if the fight was way too much for him in the first place, but in the even that someone is able to push Ryu to admit defeat, he will hate himself forever, and fear he may never recover from a loss.

    - Systems Failure (aka Death)- No one likes death, its not in anyones nature to just want to die and even for this android, he knows that death is the inevitable outcome, he still does not wish it to become a reality.

    Motivations/Goals: (3 minimum)

    - To bring the world together: He has been programmed to follow the wants and dreams of the brain that gave him functionality. This particular brain wanted to become a world famous musician through any means necessary, and wanted to use music to bring the world together in harmony (enough with the music jokes or ill get in treble).

    - To obtain ultimate power: Secretly through his magical abilities and desires, a hidden desire of his is to become basically a god in the world. His goal to never lose will continue to push his body to the point where it it might destroy itself before it gives in to any opponent.

    - To fall in love: Now where Ryu is actually an Android, his human side (mostly his brain) wants to understand what love truly is and potentially have a family. Its rather weird but once he gets used to certain people and have some what of a commitment to liking them, he begins to do stupid things around them such as taking fatal blows or dare devilish stunts

    Appearance:

    Hair: Black

    Eyes: Blue

    Skin Tone: Standard Caucasian

    Height: 180 cm (5'11")

    Weight: 79.4 kg (175 lbs)

    Overall Appearances: Typically scene wearing black on black, like a plain black tee shirt or a pair of black jeans, which usually have a belt. Usually always has a jacket as well which is brown leather and is worn all year round, when he decides to wear it that is. He always carries a guitar on his back (which the founder has allowed but it has no magic abilities...yet). (I have been informed by the founder of the site that i MAY own and carry the guitar so long as it has no magical advantages, thank you.)

    Other:
    Rank: D
    Guild: Fairy Tail
    Guild Tattoo Back of the Neck
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    Post by RockLegendRyu Mon Sep 14, 2015 6:48 pm

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    Post by Krow Tue Sep 15, 2015 9:08 am

    APPROVED!
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    Post by Bacon Tue Sep 22, 2015 12:11 pm

    Now for your 2nd approval.

    Ability 1:

    what exactly do you mean and where are you trying to go with this?

    Ability 2:

    Seeing as you're simply just levitating.. this works, so sure.


    Bump when done!!~
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    Post by RockLegendRyu Wed Sep 23, 2015 11:23 am

    bump?
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    Post by Bacon Wed Sep 23, 2015 1:44 pm

    Spoiler:

    Seeing as you have the 'normal' human capacities and capability, erase the red part. After that, bump and you shall be approved ^^
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    Post by RockLegendRyu Wed Sep 23, 2015 5:33 pm

    bump!
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    Post by Bacon Thu Sep 24, 2015 3:10 pm

    RockLegendRyu:

    Database: Basically like a brain but it is a gigantic storage space for information. Is a wireless information HUD, that is constantly adapting, gathering new Intel and saving it in a storage bank; kinda like a photo-graphic memory. This ability does not include; whispering, muffled sounds (such as through door or walls unless the volume is louder than normal), peripherals cannot be focused on, through obscure conditions; such as intense rain, pure darkness, intense light, smoke, mist ect., small spaces such as crack or hole too small to visible see through.

    Looks good. I will, once again, add that this ability has no further range than what a human has.

    Anti-Gravitational Flux Capacitors (aka Flight): A device located within the abdominal region of his body, that expands towards each limb using a set of ethereal energy absorbing canals and tubs, that are connected to a port upon the center of his hands, and base of his feet which consists of two extra ports. These ports consistently absorb non-consumed ethereal energy when he is not applying his own stored energy. When not using internal magical energy he can levitate at max 10 feet off the ground.

    This is alright although I will stress you can use this once per post with the limit of 5 times per thread. If you would like to change this, please contact me. Feel free to ask Raiden fo my skype.


    Other than that....

    APPROVED!~

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