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    Victoria Mavis [Complete]

    Victoria
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    Post by Victoria Sat Oct 17, 2015 10:05 pm




    Victoria Mavis







    Name: Victoria Mavis
    Nickname: N/A
    Age: Physically, 21; Spiritually, 216
    Birthday: February 28
    Species: Sky Spirit
    [A Sky Spirit is a creature born of the element itself that isn’t necessarily immortal, but lives forever unless caught in a life-taking injury or drowns. They begin as a simple spirit until they wish to live with the physical. Once they take on a physical form, they grow until anywhere from 18-21 at which they don’t age, and cannot die of natural causes (old age, natural illness - although they can get sick, etc.). They have a general weakness to water in both forms. Typically, their physical form is human and their spiritual form is relative to a bird.]
    Species Ability/Perk:
    Sky Wings :: Flight
    Victoria can make translucent wings appear from her back, incredibly lightweight and giving off a blue glow. They’re shaped similar to those of a typical angel or a large bird. These wings are able to pull from the breeze thus allowing her to fly for as long as they are visible in accordance to the height limit chart. As they are directly connected to her spirit, so much so that they practically are spirit, they can be summoned and dismissed. Upon dismissal, they shimmer lightly and fade away, returning to the spirit flow.

    Sky Wings :: Spiritual Manifestation
    Victoria's wings are directly connected to her spirit, so much so that they practically are. Because of this state of being, they cannot be hit by normal means. Magic that relates to or uses spirits can injure them, as does her species' natural weakness: water. Overall, they aren't physical and physical objects aside from those listed merely pass right through them.

    Special/Unique Characteristics:
    As explained above, Sky Spirits can choose their physical form before they take it up. As such, Victoria chose to have a trait with which she can change her eye color at will between varying shades of pink and brown to match her hair. When asked about it by those who don’t know what she is, she may originally pass it off as a rare gene passed down from a generation centuries ago until they can manage to gain her trust or witness her wings. It doesn’t really do much else besides its cosmetic and mocking affect.




    + Alignment: Neutral Good
    Personality:
    First impressions with Victoria can make her come off as high-classed. Often times she speaks properly and serious in tone. She tends to hold a posture of pride, chin up and back straight. She’s observant, judging strangers by their behaviors and actions and seeing the type of people they are. She does her best to judge accordingly as to not immediately offend someone should she approach them. She’s seemingly very forgiving to first incidences of rudeness towards her, only really taking offense if underestimated. However, she can grow angered and irritated with a person given her enough time.

    Once acquainted with a person, Victoria grows a bit looser around them. She grows a bit more sarcastic and friendly. She tends to be more relaxed with a looser posture and calm tone of voice. However, there is still a downside to all of this. While her judging eyes may be gone, she will show a bit more of her irritation and anger as the levels rise, resorting to a light hit or kick to the cause of this emotional rise. She can grow stressed as well, something she is willing to show among her fellow guild members. This can often lead to a shorter fuse or her retreating away from people and doing something to soothe her nerves, be it reading, walking, or just plain out sleeping.

    Victoria shows respect where it’s given. She’s one of those people who won’t handle being overlooked very well and as such can grow offended – or hostile depending on the variation of the act. Her hostility can easily lead to a battle. Often times in any fight, she can be a confident in her movements and actions, taunting the challenger out of fun and holding a smile throughout the entire thing. She hides her stress levels relatively well, refusing to show potential signs of weakness or struggle if she can prevent it. When fighting with a team, she plays where she’s needed, offense or defense whilst attempting to create a strategy of attack.

    However when she’s alone in battle, she follows a simple strategy of defend and attack. During her defense stage, she tries taking as little damage as possible while she assesses her opponent in order to figure out how they attack before making any major moves herself. She'll plan out how she would approach the situation before entering the attack stage. With the arrival of this phase, she follows a mental plan of offensive moves, making changes as needed between spells and defense. Overall, she's quick on her feet, able to dodge most attacks and attempt to counter with her own. If it'll benefit her plans, she may even take a hit or two willingly. She tends to hold a higher respect for those who can defeat her, even if she doesn't show it.

    Likes:
    -Relaxing walks: Something about taking the time away from missions to enjoy the cool breezes and the feeling of being able to take her time just appeals to Victoria.

    -Reading: She fairly enjoys reading. It’s a time-passer, really.

    -Appreciation: Compliments, acknowledgement, awards, etc. all take favor with her. She enjoys being credited with her own work.

    -Butterflies: They’re beautiful, graceful, and yet they’re so small. It’s like an inspiration to Victoria. After all, if something so small can be as glorified as that, imagine how much she can become.

    Dislikes:
    -Feeling useless: Victoria hates standing around and doing nothing on important matters. She prefers to be involved in battles, be her role defending or attacking.

    -Disrespect: She has a low tolerance for people who show disrespect to her. She doesn’t like being looked down on as she does have her dignity, one that will not be tarnished if she can prevent it.

    -Lacking reason/plans: Going into anything without a plan is just foolish, and she is not a fool. Of course, seeing as how people tend to do this, it’s a simple brush-off dislike that she can just sigh with and move on to the next thing.

    Fears:
    -Drowning: On top of her species weakness in its physical being, she can’t really swim, and as a result, has a fear of drowning. Now, this isn’t the same as a fear of water. She’ll go to the beach of something, but she tends not to go too far into water, keeping her head above it at all times.

    -Snakes: Snakes are deadly, slithering creatures with sharp fangs and stealthy movements. They could strike at any time with their venom and she could die. Looking one of those things in the eye is practically staring into the soul of death itself.

    -Being forgotten: Wanting to make an impression on the world, being forgotten is the exact opposite of her goal. While this is one of her more minor, internal fears, it’s still one that can often make her double think and make her heart sink.

    Motivations/Goals:
    -Rusty Hearts: She cares a lot for her guild and her guildmates. She'd much rather sacrifice herself than lose even the weakest mage among them, especially if it's beneficial to the guild's goals. Because of this, she's striving to achieve the best for them and their guild morals.

    -Past: Although orphaned at her physical birth, she was adopted by an encouraging couple to whom she had promised great things to. And she doesn’t tend go back on that promise.

    -Future: She wants to keep going, to see what’s in store for her. Constant wonder about what will happen next keeps her moving, wanting to know what this life would hold for her.





    Hair: Victoria possesses oddly colored hair. The right half is a soft pink with a few white streaks running through it whilst the left half brunette. It’s long and wavy with a slight curl at the ends, reaches down to the start of her thighs when left down. Her bangs are swooped over her right eye.
    Eyes: Commonly, her left eye is pink whilst the right is brown however this can alternate if she wills it.
    Skin Tone: She naturally possesses a slightly pale skin tone.
    Height: She stands at a 5’3”.
    Weight: Generally 120lbs, give or take a few.
    Overall Appearances: [Visual Reference on the First Tab]
    The outfit seen is her usual wear. It consists of a white tailcoat cut short in the front stopping above her stomach with a pink interior. Below the jacket is a fitting black top curving to the middle at a bottom, revealing her hips. She wears dark brown pants with a belt, as well as white boots that stop below the knee. Her boots are adorned with buttons and possess high heels, boosting her height about 4 inches, both brown in color to match her pants. She wears a brown pair of gloves and at least two necklaces, and to top the general apparel off, she carries around a pink parasol or umbrella.

    When reading something she truly wishes to get focused on, she wears a pair of glasses. They serve no purpose, really.


    Rank: SS-Rank Mage
    Guild: Rusty Hearts
    Guild Tattoo Her tattoo, gray in color, can be found on the back of her neck.



    I don’t really want blood on my gloves today, she stated, tightening her hold. So, please, don’t make this any more difficult than it has to be.





    ~Credit go to the creators for the template used above and for the images used for their works~
    Note to self: Decide best alignment for char. & add a small section referring to the guild in personality.


    Last edited by Victoria on Tue Mar 08, 2016 7:47 am; edited 9 times in total
    Mizuko
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    Post by Mizuko Sun Oct 18, 2015 4:59 pm

    Hiya! I'm Mizuko, I'll be grading your app today.

    Species
    The ageless, reincarnation thing is technically a perk. You'll need to make a perk for it or remove it, if you don't want to remove your current perks.

    Species Perk

    For your first perk, wings, plus speed increases equal two perks. You'll need to remove one of those. As well as that, your speed is far too high. Please lower it, and maybe have it increase per rank.

    For your second perk, please refer to Health in the Magic rules. That pertains to it rather well. As for 10% for every three posts, that's high for a D-Rank mage, plus it has no real cooldown?

    That's it, really. Good app, I loved reading through your personality in particular.
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    Post by Victoria Wed Oct 21, 2015 9:33 pm

    Edited!
    - Shortened the description under species
    - Removed reincarnation idea
    - Removed speed measurement from Wings of the Sky
    - Replaced 'Spiritual Regeneration' with Spiritual Life
    - Changed Blue Pegasus to Arcana Force
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    Post by Grimrok Sun Oct 25, 2015 2:18 pm

    "Overall, she's quick on her feet, easily able to dodge attacks and counter with her own."


    I ask that you reword this. It can be used to an advantage. I know it's dumb, but I've seen it. Maybe say can dodge most attacks and attempt to counter.
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    Post by Victoria Sun Oct 25, 2015 9:38 pm

    Changed as was asked!
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    Post by Grimrok Mon Oct 26, 2015 1:30 am

    Character Approved!
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    Post by Genesis Tue Feb 23, 2016 1:16 pm

    Moved for edits~
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    Post by Victoria Tue Feb 23, 2016 5:16 pm

    Bump~
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    Post by Genesis Thu Feb 25, 2016 8:59 pm

    A few quick edits don't worry

    You're missing the alignment so I request you add that in.

    As for your flight perk, state that you follow the height limit chart

    Bump when edits have been made

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