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    Axium Ikaru

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    Post by Axium 'War' Ikaru Wed Feb 10, 2016 7:25 pm

    Axium Ikaru
    War
    20(Appears to be)
    May 5
    Devil
    D
    True Neutral(N/N)
    Male


    Species Ability/Perk

    - Devil's Flight: A standard flight perk. Allows for flight according to the flight  and height rules, while also having the wings being retractable into the body. The wings themselves are magical in nature and tend to be small but still enable flight(Think highschool DxD wings).
    - Eyes of the Devil's Marksman: Gains a passive +2 Rank to the Precision stat at the cost of being unable to raise the Strength and Endurance Stat pass the Rank of C. The +2 is a constant passive upon his current rank in the stat, i.e. at D-Rank a standard mage has a D-Ranked Precision Stat whereas this perk would consider it B-
    Rank. The cost to upgrade the stat would still be from D to C as the stat is that of D Rank. On to with the negative side o the perk, with the capping of the Strength and Endurance stats. This negative makes it to where I cannot train either stat pass the rank of C nor can they be boosted pass by perks or magic otherwise. NOTE: This is a constant passive perk, meaning that it is constantly active.


    Special Unique Characteristics

    Center of the back rests a Tattoo silver cross with a gold and crimson crown in the center foreground.


    Character Depth
    Personality: Axium was born into an raised in the Devil's royalty, however not as a prince but as a butler. From the day he was born he was taught and trained into the ways of serving and following orders to the 't'. This has led to him having a obedient attitude and a 'caring' outlook. He himself does happen to somewhat be reclusive in showing emotions, relying mostly on his words to convey his feelings rather than tone and body language. This is not all to say that he has a robot's ideal, rather that he has patience and understanding rather that outwardly emotional bursts. His full range of outwardly appearance and thought process fully shows through who he is following, whether they wish for a more aggressive hunting dog, or a more docile, protective wolf.

    As for the process of which Axium fights shows through his somewhat different fighting style. Where as most mages use high powered spells or empowered melee attacks, Axium prefers a calculated distanced notion of combat. He rarely wishes to get into blade range and lets his calm state and safety on the battlefield be maintained. Similar to his usual personality outside of a battle, the severity and the distance he will drag his enemy to depends upon who he currently follows. Where as a kind and caring leader will cause Axium to follow a more merciful and lenient itinerary, where as a more darker, ferocious leader will bloom more sadistic and gruesome combat scenarios. From a base standpoint, Axium prefers quicker and clean fights,but as stated, will go to whatever lengths is necessary to satisfy his master.

    The thought process and 'appearance' is that of a obedient and well trained butler. He never did and does not possess a 'self' and is an honest shell. He adopted some traits to call his own but is still a ever forming person. He has the capability to make decisions on his own, but truly does not wish to do them himself as not to displease. He was born to serve and lives to serve, for to die protecting your master is glory.

    Likes: (3 minimum)
    - Serving: The man is a butler, its life and love.
    - Guns: Though his main weapon class, even the newest and the old catch his eye in intrigue.
    - Classical Music: Its soothing tones and ever changing tempo has claimed heart to Axium's taste

    Dislikes: (3 minimum)
    - Polearms: This weapon class specifically brings distaste to Axium mostly for the somewhat cowardly use of them normally.
    - Bitter Taste: The awful after taste in his mouth leaves little to be desired.
    - Slave: Axium has a huge distaste to being called a slave, and its honestly degrading.

    Fears: (3 minimum)
    - Death:This is not for himself, actually honoring death in circumstances, but death of whoever he is serving. This would seem as failure to his job.
    - Bed-ridden: For a butler to be unable to do his job is a disgrace and is something Axium cannot afford.
    - Masterless: To not have a master is to be useless.

    Motivations/Goals: (3 minimum)
    - Axium wishes to become the greatest Butler
    - Axium wished to eventually find a master to follow forever.
    - His master is his greatest motivation, to please and to protect is all he knows


    Appearance
    Hair: Black
    Eyes: Sky Blue
    Skin Tone: Light
    Height: 6'0"
    Weight: 195lbs.
    Overall Appearances: (Optional)


    Other

    Guild: Animus Sin
    Guild Tattoo: Back of neck, center; White





    Last edited by Axium 'War' Ikaru on Mon Feb 15, 2016 9:41 pm; edited 2 times in total
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    Post by Genesis Mon Feb 15, 2016 3:15 pm

    Hi my name is Genesis and I'll be grading your app today. Let's get started.

    Devil's Flight:State that it follows the height limit chart.

    Eyes of the Devil's Marksman: This perk is currently being talked about so by the time you edit you should have your answer.
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    Post by Axium 'War' Ikaru Mon Feb 15, 2016 5:14 pm

    Bump for edits
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    Post by Genesis Mon Feb 15, 2016 9:26 pm

    Alright that perk has been discussed.

    Expand the meaning of the +2 precision at any rank. Furthermore, I'll need to see how each rank his character is affects him. "Passes the rank of C" is vague. Do you mean his overall perks are capped at C rank? Or when its 'activated,' does it go down to C?
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    Post by Axium 'War' Ikaru Mon Feb 15, 2016 9:41 pm

    bump
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    Post by Genesis Tue Feb 16, 2016 7:22 pm

    Alright here are some corrections that need to be done.

    I'm going to need an explanation on what a Devil is. A paragraph of description would be fine.

    Unfortunately retractable wings count as a perk so I'm afraid you either must remove it or replace it.

    Before I get into grading the perk itself. Explain why your character can logically have more precision in exchange for less strength and endurance. Perks need to be fair however they also need to make sense logically.

    Bump when edits are made~

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