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    Madpluto
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    Post by Madpluto Fri Oct 30, 2015 11:36 pm

    Kent Lensa
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    Mad Pluto
    21
    Aug 12
    Demigod
    D
    Neutral Good
    Male


    Species Ability/Perk
    Demigod: Kent's father is a Water God slayer. He has killed many gods and in doing so has become a god himself. It is a similar to how if dragon slayers use their magic frequently enough they can potentially turn into dragons themselves. Due his father essentially becoming a god and his mother being a normal human Kent is a demigod. However, because of this. Kent is endowed with certain types of skills such as:

    Enhanced durability: He can last a long time in fights and doesn't get injured easily. as such he is able to increase his endurance for a tier for 2 posts with a cool down of three posts increasing by one as his skill level increases (at C tier he would have 3 posts with a cool down of 4 and so on). Water, fire, light and ice moves would do 25 percent less damage to him to him whereas wind, metal, earth and lightning moves effect him 25 percent more than most other spells.  

    Magical Genius: He can retain vast amounts of magical knowledge and can conceptualize spells easily. This makes him able to learn the weaknesses of given magic types with ease if he sees an opponent do at least three spells he is able to work out an effective counter to them.


    Special Characteristics
    N/A

    Character Depth
    Personality: Kent is a quiet but by no means shy person. He, by virtue of his lineage, can be quite arrogant and feels like he knows a lot more than he does. Even so, he is quite smart and has a quick tongue. He is a very keen observer and would rather watch a conversation unfold than jump into it himself. He tends to be alone a lot because he doesn't speak much but he doesn't mind it. He would rather read a book than anything else. When he needs to, Kent actually is a good conversationalist and will gladly talk to many people at length if he finds them interesting enough. He always manages to find interesting people both in the guild and outside of it. Despite his, he has few friends there are only a few people he trusts truly and those people are his friends. His pride has known to get the better of him and that is his main weakness. When he is goaded by others or when he feels that people don't like him he acts like he is better than them because he has more knowledge than them which is more often than not, wrong. He is quick to get over his mistakes and will apologize if he needs to. If he feels that he is at fault then he will but usually although he may actually in the wrong he doesn't see it that way.
    Kent is quite skilled in his magic but has a tendency to get overconfident. Although he can read people and knows the weaknesses of most magic, his overconfidence has led him to lose many battles over the years. When in battle, Kent is serious but restrained. It takes him a lot to get riled up and fight with less finesse. Because of his many years of rigorous magic training from his father he is quite disciplined and will fights with skill and poise. His demeanour only changes when he is on his last legs or he has been insulted to the point where his arrogance gets the better of him. Since Kent is a firm believer in learning, he learns from his mistakes very easily and trains hard to correct them. He got the name Mad Pluto because as a child, he used to make attempts and heavily body magic since he hadn't settled on a specific type of magic yet. The first attempt was to use the power of pluto to enhance his time freezing skills it didn't go well. In fact it nearly destroyed his family estate. He accidentally combined both the powers of Pluto and Jupiter which made for quite a gigantic explosion. The nickname was actually given to him by his father as annoyed as he was at the time, Kent's father couldn't help but laugh and from then on was that "Mad Pluto".

    Likes: (3 minimum)
    -Books: Kent is an avid reader and is able to read at an accelerated rate. He feels that there is always something to be learned for opening a book.

    -Nature: Kent love the wilderness and loves to go exploring in it He will often spend days out in the wilderness looking at forests and the nature that resides within them.

    -Dancing: Kent loves to dance. Although he is quiet he is by no means shy when it comes to dancing. He leaned to dance from his mother and tends to keep the tradition up when he is at the guild.  

    Dislikes: (3 minimum)
    - Cloudy Days: Cloudy days make for boring days there's no sun to make everything warm and fun to be outside.

    -Winter for the same reason. The cold and dark days do nothing to make his world happy and fun. although sometimes snow can be nice.

    - Thieves: Kent doesn't like it when people take his stuff without asking. with that in mind, he is more than willing to share if they ask.

    Fears: (3 minimum)
    - Being disliked: Although Kent can be very arrogant, it stems from the fact that he is insecure and uses his attitude as a defence mechanism.  

    - His Family Being Hurt: Kent wouldn't forgive himself if something happened to his family he will do anything to protect them.  

    -Not living up to his Father's expectations: Kent's was a demanding man and that discipline has been instilled in him he doesn't want to let his family down and so he pushes himself very hard.  

    Motivations/Goals: (3 minimum)
    -Keeping his family safe: he will fight to the death to save his family making sure they don't get hurt is always goal number 1.

    -Becoming the best Mage there is in his pursuit of knowledge Kent strives to know everything about magic

    -Being able to see the world Kent wants to explore as many regions as possible in order to get the best kind of experience from this world.
    -


    Appearance
    Hair: Red
    Eyes: Green
    Skin Tone: White
    Height: 5ft'11
    Weight: 178 lbs
    Overall Appearances: Kent has Red hair cut in a way that happened by accident. Trying to practice with his mother's swords, he accidentally swiped at his hair and cut his bangs in that way that covers his right eye. he has kept that style since he was 12. Many people say that he looks like his mother especially when his hair is long. His eyes are a piercing emerald green with a glint of blue every now and then usually when he is feeling mischievous. He walks with a slight swagger and has a very eloquent manner of speaking. Kent doesn't really use his hands much to talk instead preferring a single stare or glare. When he is with intimate company he is actually quite soft-spoken and more particular with his motions.


    Other

    Guild: Fairy Tail
    Guild Tattoo:Its navy blue on the back of his left shoulder blade





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    Post by Madpluto Sun Nov 01, 2015 3:04 pm

    bump!
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    Post by Krow Mon Nov 02, 2015 3:57 pm

    Um. . . Can you please use the current Template?
    Just transfer over the information.
    The template you used is outdated.
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    Post by Madpluto Mon Nov 02, 2015 4:18 pm

    DONE!!
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    Post by Krow Mon Nov 02, 2015 4:34 pm

    Hello there, my names is Sora, I'm the man who will become Lord of the Skies!!
    Anyways, I will be grading your application today!
    All of the needed modification will look like this.
    Madpluto wrote:
    Kent Lensa
    )
    Mad Pluto
    21
    Aug 12
    Demigod
    D
    Neutral
    Male


    Species Ability/Perk
    Being a the son of a God slayer who has killed a god Kent has a few gifts that have been granted to him such as enhanced durability: he can last a long time in fights and doesn't get injured easily. as such he is able to increase his endurance for a tier for 2 posts with a cool down of three posts increasing by one as his skill level increases (at C tier he would have 3 posts with a cool down of 4 and so on). Please put a lines worth of space between the Species Description and the first perk. Also, we need an example of what kinds of attacks won't do much damage and what kinds will do damage.

    Vast amounts of knowledge: He also by his has vast amounts of knowledge and can learn things very quickly and knows much about many different subjects that is he can learn the weaknesses of given magic types with ease.
    This isn't really a perk, this is just saying you are knowledgeable, which is something anyone can be.



    Special Characteristics
    N/A

    Character Depth
    Personality: Kent is a quiet but by no means shy person. He, by virtue of is is should be his lineage can be quite arrogant and feels like he knows a lot more than he does. Even so, he is quite smart and asas should be has a quick tongue. He is a very keen observer and would rather watch a conversation unfold than jump into it himself. He tends to be alone a lot because he doesn't speak much but he doesn't mind it. He would rather read a book than anything else. When he needs to Kent actually is a good conversationalist and will gladly talk to many people at length if he finds them interesting enough. He always manages to find interesting people both in the guild and outside of it. Despite his, he has few friends there are only a few people he trusts truly and those people are his friends. His pride has known to get the better of him and that is his main weakness, When he is goaded by others or when he feels that people don't like him he acts like he is better than them because he has more knowledge than them which is more often than not, wrong. He is quick to get over his mistakes and will apologize if he needs to. If he feels that he is at fault then he will but usually although he actually in the wrong he doesn't see it that way.
    Kent is quite skilled in his magic but has a tendency to get over confident although he can read people and knows the weaknesses of most magic, his over confidence has led him to loose many battles over the years. When in battle, Kent is serious but restrained it takes him a lot to get riled up and fight with less finesse. because of his many years of rigorous magic training from his father he is quite disciplined and will fights with skill and poise. His demeanour only changes when he is on his last legs or he has been insulted to the point where is arrogance get the better of him. Since Kent is a firm believer in learning, he learns from his mistakes very easily and trains hard to correct them. He got the name Mad Pluto because as a child, he used to make attempts and heavily body magic since he hadn't settled on a specific type of magic yet. The first attempt was to use the power of pluto to enhance his time freezing skills it didn't go well. In fact it nearly destroyed his family estate. He accidentally combined both the powers of Pluto and Jupiter which made for quite a gigantic explosion. The nickname was actually given to him by his father as annoyed as he was at the time, Kent's Father couldn't help but laugh and from then on was that Mad Pluto.

    Likes: (3 minimum)
    -Books: Kent is an avid reader and is able to read at an accelerated rate he feels that there is always something to be learned for opening a book.

    -Nature: Kent love the wilderness and loves to go exploring in it He will often spend days out in the wilderness looking at forests and the nature that resides within them.

    -Dancing: Kent loves to dance. Although he is quiet he is by no means shy when it comes to dancing. He leaned to dance from his mother and tends to keep the tradition up when he is at the guild.  

    Dislikes: (3 minimum)
    - Cloudy Days:cloudy days make for boring days there's no sun to make everything warm and fun to be outside.

    -Winter for the same reason. The cold and dark days do nothing to make his world happy and fun. although sometimes snow can be nice.

    - Thieves: Kent doesn't like it when people take his stuff without asking. with that in mind, he is more than willing to share if they ask.

    Fears: (3 minimum)
    - Being disliked: although Kent can be very arrogant, it stems from the fact that he is insecure and uses his attitude as a defence mechanism.  

    - His Family Being Hurt: Kent wouldn't forgive himself if something happened to his family he will do anything to protect them.  

    -Not living up to his Father's expectations: Kent's was a demanding man and that discipline has been instilled in him he doesn't want to let his family down and so he pushes himself very hard.  

    Motivations/Goals: (3 minimum)
    -Keeping his family safe: he will fight to the death to save his family making sure they don't get hurt is always goal number 1.

    -Becoming the best Mage there is in his pursuit of knowledge Kent strives to know everything about magic

    -Being able to see the world Kent wants to explore as many regions as possible in order to get the best kind of experience from this world.
    -


    Appearance
    Hair: Red
    Eyes: Green
    Skin Tone: White
    Height: 5ft'11
    Weight: 178Lbs
    Overall Appearances: Kent has Red hair cut in a way that happened by accident. Trying to practice with his mother's swords he accidentally swiped at his hair he cut his bangs in that way that covers his right eye. he has kept that style since he was 12. Many people say that he looks like his mother especially when his hair is long. His eyes are a piercing emerald green with a glint of blue every now and then usually when he is feeling mischievous. He walks with a slight swagger and has a very eloquent manner of speaking. Kent doesn't really use his hands much to talk instead preferring a single stare or glare. When he is with intimate company,he is actually quite soft-spoken and more particular with his motions


    Other

    Guild: Fairytail
    Guild Tattoo: Back of his left shoulder blade




    All I can suggest at this moment, is that you go back through it, namely the personality section and double check the spelling and grammar. Outside of that, this application is awesome.
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    Post by Madpluto Mon Nov 02, 2015 7:19 pm

    ok I checked for spelling and grammar its done!
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    Post by Krow Tue Nov 03, 2015 5:05 pm

    First Approval.
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    Post by Selenia Wed Nov 04, 2015 8:58 pm

    Hi there, I'm Selenia and I'll be grading your app today ^^

    About your race: it says you're a demigod, and yet your father isn't a god but a god slayer. Can you clarify on how your character is a demigod?

    For your allegiance, "Neutral" what? There's Lawful Neutral, True Neutral, Chaotic Neutral, Neutral Good, Neutral Evil. If you need more information, you can find it online c:

    Spoiler:
    Other than an explanation on how your character is a demigod, please note that your character will not have the ability to learn magic faster OOC or IC since it isn't a perk (as you can only have two of those). Also, the only enhancements will be the two perks you list.

    Spoiler:
    I know Krow told you to say what he is weak to and strong to, but I'm unfortunately going to have you make chance plant to something else since it isn't as common as the rest (might I suggest earth/ground) and then set them all at a set percentage (percentage would be the same for all, resistances or weaknesses). Also, the wording would need to be changed from "easier to hit him with" since that's kind of vague to something like "does more damage to him". You could also change the perk a bit to just boost his endurance stat (which affects defense/durability) for those same time periods, which would be fine and I recommend ^^. For more information on stats, see here  

    Spoiler:
    There's a few different perks here so I'm going to ask you to edit this a bit. Just to remind you, you won't be able to OOC or IC quickly learn things and especially not know info about other characters unless you asked them and RPed it out, and furthermore you won't be able to learn the weaknesses of magic types with ease due to the fact that this would need to be its own perk. However, if you want to leave the rune magic trap (by which I think you would mean things like Jutsu Shiki, but let me know if not), then I believe that would be fine.

    I suggest you take a closer look at grammar, but especially punctuation, sentence structure, and capitalization. There are quite a few errors throughout the app that can be fixed.

    Finally, Fairy Tail is two words and your guild mark needs a color.

    Once you've made these edits, please bump and I'll get to you ASAP, thanks!

    (If you have any questions, feel free to PM me)
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    Post by Madpluto Fri Nov 06, 2015 5:42 pm

    ok done bump
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    Post by Selenia Fri Nov 06, 2015 7:46 pm

    I approve ^~^

    Just on a sidenote, even if your character does figure out the weaknesses of their magic, it may be possible or impossible for you to counter it; it depends on your magic. As long as it is actually a weakness of your magic that you are taking advantage of, you're good to go!

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