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    Post by Chao-Li Xin Wed Sep 09, 2015 9:32 pm

    In-Site Information:

    General Information:
    Name: Chao-Li Xin
    Nickname: Xin
    Age: 22
    Species: Human
    Species Ability/Perk:

    • RETALIATION: When Xin falls below 30% health, his spells deal 20% more damage for a 5 post period of time, and can only be used once per battle. If Xin enters another battle at 30% health or lower this passive is ineffective.
    • FUROR:  When Xin is hit by an enemy spell, he gains a spell rank-dependent amount of Fury points. (D ranks give 1, C give 2, B give 3, A give 4 and S+ give 5.) Once he reaches 5 Fury points he gains a single stack of Rage. For each stack of Rage he obtains, he can choose to empower his next spell, causing it to deal 5% more damage. Once a spell is empowered, the rage stack is spent and more Fury points must be gained in order to access it again. At a single time, Xin may only have 2 rage stacks, and he can only build 3 stacks in a topic. After reaching 10 fury points he stops gaining them. If used in conjunction with Retaliation, the former ability's damage increase is reduced to 5%. Unexpended stacks that remain after 5 posts are lost.

    (I've run these passives by Sonya/Serenity, and she was OK with them.)
    Special/Unique Characteristics: His back is riddled with scars from competitive fights.

    Character Depth:
    Personality: Listing these, if that's okay. Battle traits are designated in red.

    • Competitive: Ever since Xin was a small child he had been thrust into numerous competitive situations- most involving some form of fighting or combat- and held to expectations concerning indisputable victory. As such, he has become incredibly competitive, especially when it comes to fighting in tournaments.
    • Bitter: Xin has never actually been considered the "best" at anything- despite his above average skills, his ability has always been dwarfed by at least one or two competitors of far superior ability. Often, he goes unnoticed and unrespected. This has led him to become a bitter, angry individual who strives for perfection and utmost victory. If he does not achieve this he becomes incredibly irritable or falls into depression. Since he is not praised or recognized even for things he excels in, hatred for those who are quickly rises.
    • Self-Critical: As a result of his bitterness about failure, Xin has become incredibly self-critical. To address this trait of his, he trains his body, mind and soul intensely, and experiences mental forms of torture if he is not able to accomplish his goals.  
    • Envious: Despite his constant struggle to improve, Xin always seems to fall short in some degree. Thus, he looks at those who are superior to him with an extreme envy. This goes hand-in-hand with his bitterness.
    • Headstrong: Again, despite his self-criticizing tendencies, Xin still firmly believes he is exceptionally skilled- especially in battle. He abhors it when other people tell him that he can't do something, or that he is unable to accomplish a task he wants to accomplish. When there's a will, there's a way- he just hasn't found the way yet.
    • Irritable: Xin is an irritable individual in general- he absolutely despises those who nag him or annoy him in any way. Since he gets annoyed quite easily, he sadly does not have many friends.
    • Empathetic: This trait here might conflict with the rest of the traits listed, but to those in similar situations, Xin can be surprisingly empathetic. He knows what it feels like to never come in first place, or to not have his skill recognized by many, and how frustrating it can be. He also takes pity upon the helpless, or the lost.
    • Sarcastic: Xin does not make friends easily- but when he does, these friends are exposed to the witty, sarcastic side of him. His relationships are based off of dry, snarky humor.
    • Cynical: Xin has a twisted viewpoint of the world- everyone who he does not know incredibly well is out to get him. Thus, he adopts a cynical and pessimistic viewpoint upon most activities.
    • Mistrusting: Tying in with his cynicism, Xin finds it hard to trust people. He believes most people to be saboteurs who would not hesitate to cut him down and gain an upper hand over him if given the chance. (This is another reason why Xin has so few friends.)
    • Combat-Minded: Xin loves fighting- he finds it to be one of his favorite activities. When pitted against an opponent in a competitive setting, Xin enters an almost trancelike state of focus, striking and dodging and blocking with excellent timing. When he begins to lose matches, he feels as though he is overcome by waves of energy, pulsating through his body and giving him strength and resolve to continue. He almost never gives up during a fight.
    • Intelligent: Not only pushed to succeed in battle, Xin has been pressured to do well academically during his school days. He was a top-ranking scholar, but always fell short of first in class when it came to exam scores. Nevertheless, he has retained an incredible intellect and top-notch wit.
    • Angry: During combat, the more injured he gets, the more angry Xin becomes. He uses this anger as drive to push forward and defeat his opponents quickly. When he is close to losing he enters a frenzied state and fights viciously to win- or at least leave the opponent hurting the next morning if failure to win is the only option.
    • Calculative: Xin uses his intellect to analyze his opponents and strike them in ways that will ensure him the win.
    • Driven: Motivated by his past failures and his desire to gain respect and recognition, Xin has an incredible drive and "will to win" that he uses in battle.
    • Unmerciful: Nothing stands between Xin and his will to win; he is not above brutalizing his opponents if it helps him secure his overarching goal to be the best.
    • Protective: In a tag-team battle or a fight with allies, he is incredibly protective with those on his side. He knows that losing an ally would handicap him and his chances of victory.
    • Agile: Not much of a personality trait- however, Xin's reflexes seem to improve as he fights, making him more wiry and agile.
    • Mocking: He often mocks his foes in fights which he feels are going "too easily" for him- he hopes this will spur them on and make them land harder strikes.


    Likes: (3 minimum)
    - Combat- He sees combat as an opportunity to learn new ways to win (or at least attempt to gain victory.)
    - Spicy Food- He likes the taste of spicy food; he often ingests copious qualities of spicy food because he feels that if he can endure the burn in his mouth he will be able to endure other sources of pain for longer as well.
    - Victory- He rarely sees this- Victory ushers in a sense of glory that Xin has desired since he was introduced to the world of combat.

    Dislikes: (3 minimum)
    - Coming in Second Place- Second place is not first place- and is therefore not a true winning position. Xin accepts nothing but the best.
    - Not being recognized for his achievements- Xin puts in hard work, and when he feels this work doesn't pay off he gets angry.
    - Being told he can't beat someone- He hates when anybody tells him he can't beat someone or do something. Xin believes any walls can be surpassed with the right amount of motivation and training.
    - Bitter Foods- They leave a nasty taste on his tongue. This taste distracts him from his surroundings because of how rancid it is.

    Fears: (3 minimum)
    - Defeat- Xin does not want to lose- he wishes to grow stronger and stronger each day, and defeat will not aid in this hope.
    - Deterioration of Skill- If his skills deteriorate his overall ability deteriorates. If his ability deteriorates, then victory is less of a plausible outcome in fights.
    - Humiliation- Nobody likes the sensation of feeling pathetic, or being laughed at. Combine this with Xin's overall bitter personality and it makes sense why he hates humiliation.

    Motivations/Goals: (3 minimum)
    - Win First Place in any fighting competition- He has always wanted to be the champion of some sort of battle competition to live up to a standard set for him by his father.
    - Recognition for his feats- He does not want his effort to go unnoticed; he wants others to know how much work he puts into things he does. Xin desires respect, more than anything else.
    - Be the Best at something- Despite being better than average at most things Xin has never been the absolute best at anything. He wishes to change this.

    Appearance:
    Hair: Brown; Unkempt, most of the time.
    Eyes: Brown
    Skin Tone: Fair, slightly tanned
    Height: 6'4
    Weight: 190 lbs
    Overall Appearances: Avatar, m8

    Other:
    Rank: D
    Guild: Dragon Heart
    Guild Tattoo: Lower Left Back, Red

    RP SAMPLE (For Rank):


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    Post by Mizuko Mon Sep 21, 2015 7:08 pm

    Hiya! I'll be grading your app today. So, your personality is excellent! I would recommend you put a bit more on battling, considering only about 100 of the 700 word count is battling, which doesn't give us much information. Everything from your likes down to your last motivation needs one sentence in description. As for the S Rank, that something that needs to be applied for, so until that system is completely set up, you'll need to put D.
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    Post by Chao-Li Xin Mon Sep 21, 2015 10:27 pm

    Bumped. I was told some time in the recent past that an RP sample would be necessary to apply for a higher rank; so I had been working on it for a little while. I finished in about 15 minutes ago, and then edited the app.
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    Post by Mizuko Tue Sep 22, 2015 6:56 pm

    Don't worry, the RP sakple well still be valid, you'll just have to apply later. Once you change the rank, it'll be good.
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    Post by Chao-Li Xin Tue Sep 22, 2015 9:01 pm

    Bumped again.
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    Post by Mizuko Tue Sep 22, 2015 9:52 pm

    Approved for the first time! Locking for the 2nd.
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    Post by Krow Fri Oct 02, 2015 10:03 am

    Spoiler:

    1. This ability looks cool, but I'd like you to drop the health amount at which it can be triggered down to 25%, as everyone regenerates a certain amount of health after a certain number of posts. As such, this is basically making you tank in terms of attack power, with little negative circumstances being taken on your end. This also needs a Duration and Cool-down established for it.

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    2. What rank of spell causes him to gain a stack of fury, do certain spells cause him to gain it faster or slower? Also, this needs an established Duration and Cool-down. I get that it can only be used once per fight, but you must also keep in mind, there are jobs on this site, so you could partake in multiple fights in the same thread, which would make this ability easily abused. Also, please specify the rank of the spell that is being augmented by this ability.
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    Post by Chao-Li Xin Fri Oct 09, 2015 9:54 pm

    Edited the passives so as to conform with the new Health rules.
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    Post by Bacon Fri Oct 09, 2015 11:33 pm

    Approved lol!

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